Reviews for To Be Free
mayawene chapter 9 . 3/8
Thanks for this story ! !
Guest chapter 9 . 12/30/2017
Very unusual and interesting story!
fallingtowardsoblivion chapter 9 . 12/13/2014
Daweee that was such a cute story :'3 the feels are strong with this one
XanaduHawk chapter 5 . 3/20/2014
Morgana's death scene was so touching! And I forgot to comment about it earlier, but I loved the imagery of Merlin resting in the green with butterflies all around him.
XanaduHawk chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
At least the inanimate objects appreciate Merlin's hard work.
ArthurPMerilyaE chapter 9 . 2/28/2014
WOW that story was great keep writing.

Thanks bye
aliceandthelookingglass chapter 9 . 11/11/2013
I've spent this day reading your fic and I loved it so much! I love powerful Merlin and needy Arthur. You wrote them both so well. I really enjoyed how you wrote Merlin's struggle with keeping his magic in check, his reluctance to confess his magic to Arthur, Arthur's inner thoughts about Merlin and his growing realization about his feelings for Merlin excellent !
Morgana's death was touching, and I could picture Merlin's sadness and guilt over her situation so sad.
Thank you for an brilliant read!
123-321 chapter 9 . 8/5/2013
aww
RoseThorn333 chapter 9 . 6/20/2013
Great story!
grayember13 chapter 9 . 6/5/2013
This was FANTASTIC! GREAT story!
Wolfisis chapter 9 . 3/28/2013
wow...I loved your story. Made my heart flutter.
kenya1234 chapter 9 . 2/17/2013
This was a perfect ending for another wonderful story. I could even go for a third installment. Merlin and Arthur were adorable in this. I loved the way you made the characters come together. The slow build of their relationship, the angst, the desire, the emotions, and their intimate moments. This was a beautiful story.

I liked the talk that Gwaine had with Merlin.
Arthur's proposal, the rings, and Arthur's sexual frustrations. I also liked the way Merlin handled those frustrations and saw into Arthur's mind to see exactly how he wanted to release those frustrations.

I also liked the continuation of the story between Nicholas and Alexander.

You definitely have a talent for writing and a vivid imagination to transcends into words that can be explored unto paper. Excellent work. I am so looking forward to your next Merthur story.
kenya1234 chapter 8 . 2/15/2013
This was another excellent chapter.

I loved the sword scene between Merlin and Arthur and the dragons.

It seemed that Merlin was going to have to inquire himself about the Archmage position as Arthur probably would not have told him until after the coronation.

I loved the moment between Igraine and Arthur in the cave.

The scene afterwards when Arthur was trying to explain Nicholas and Alexander was emotional though I am not sure if they were all lovers at the same time or at different times. It seems as if it were the same time and it seems that meant something important to Arthur in the past. I wonder if that will be explained further?

Merlin was so understanding and not in the least insecure. That was sweet. It also showed that he knew that Arthur was loyal and faithful to him now and did not doubt that Arthur would sway even though Nicholas and Alexander kissed Arthur in his presence.

I loved the knights and I loved Gwaine's thought processes.

I also loved Hunith presence and her practical adoption of Gwen and also Gaius' encouragement of Merlin as well.

Again, another excellent chapter. Please post again really soon.
Moon Fox chapter 7 . 2/15/2013
I love that you used Archmage and had Court Warlock as a tongue-in-cheek title. Court Warlock/Sorcerer is so over used.
kenya1234 chapter 7 . 2/15/2013
This was another excellent chapter.

I liked the moments of vulnerability in Arthur with Merlin consoling him. Loved all of the Merlin and Arthur moments.

I liked the way that Merlin responded to Arthur and all the while was still protecting him and his dignity to the people. He knew what Arthur wanted from him so to speak but he did not wish to tarnish Arthur's reputation as King or cause an uprising.

I loved how Arthur responds to this and even gets Gaius involved.

The scenes was the knights are always a fun read as well. Bestuvius? Leave it to Gwaine to get on that bandwagon.

Hunith being there was a treat.

Again, this was another excellent chapter. You have just got to post again soon.
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