this fanfict made me understand things about why charlie acts that way. Things are clearer now. Thank you. Haha. :)

This was such a cute story :0)

You paint beautiful, charming domestic scenes in this!

Yes. This is a good portrait of Charlie. His thoughts and attitude are explained well. The theme of the transformative and redemptive power of love is worth exploring. There are some good metaphors and similes too.