Sikowitz knew

nice

okay

Amazing you shouldn't doubt you're smut cause it's incredible

dammit man DATS the way i shoulda ended

interesting story but i was expecting a humiliation for Beck bcause he is an ass

I am writing a jori myself any ideas for the smut

Loved it! I just finished reading 'Midnight Dreams' and 'The Secret History of Tori and Jade'. They were both excellent stories, but lacked the intimacy that this ones provides. As for your first 'smut' story I think it turned out excellent.

I really liked it! :D I'm glad Jade took charge and did what she did.. They're together! And Beck can just back the hell off!
Jori Jori Jori! :D

Xxxxx

For a first time in the genre, I thoroughly enjoyed this. I thank you for following me, because I'm glad I got the chance to read your work. Keep up the good work.

Super Story

Very nice. Will there be a sequel?

for your first time, its good, if you do the moment longer, tell the way they are feeling, the waves of pleasure, the need to get the tension realised, and the butterflies, will make the scene with some passion, i thought u did a little "dry", but i liked the story :-)

Please continue

continue this please