Reviews for Luckless
1avidfan chapter 15 . 8/13
I am really enjoying this story. Such an unusual premise, Bella’s history is so interesting.
RememberMe10893 chapter 26 . 6/16
I just loved the whole thing ️
kadesvana chapter 1 . 6/6
thank you for sharing
QueenGB chapter 26 . 10/15/2019
It seems like it took you a while to leave WIP status RL is intense I know. So, I want to say I’m so glad you found time to finish it and I just found this completed. :-D In addition I must say it was worth it. I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
QueenGB chapter 25 . 10/15/2019
I had always wished that SM allowed Bella and Edward to have a more adult conversation when he came back from New Mooning her. I mean if you want and have an eternity then the tough conversation should be easy and required and not childish grudge holding and third party involvement. Nicely done! 600 or so years that’s a lot of changing to do so patience is paramount.
QueenGB chapter 24 . 10/14/2019
Damn Edward and Jasper that last scene was kind of sexy. ;-p
QueenGB chapter 23 . 10/14/2019
They still have to store james somewhere. He will continue to be trouble otherwise.
QueenGB chapter 22 . 10/14/2019
That was exciting like vampire mission impossible.
QueenGB chapter 21 . 10/14/2019
Dun, dun, dun! What is she up to? Poor Edward but they were right to stop him. Love is often sacrifice as well as compromise.
QueenGB chapter 20 . 10/14/2019
Damn that break up was worse than SMs in twilight. So sad. I think Felix is obsessed and definitely working without Aro approval.
QueenGB chapter 19 . 10/14/2019
So much going on. Felix is a creep. I hope he dies horribly. How are they going to fight the Volturi and deal with James? Oh and thanks a lot Jacob! Sigh.
QueenGB chapter 17 . 10/14/2019
If not a vampire scent then James must have followed Jake back home. Typical Jake is selfish. He and Rosalie would match up well in their selfish bubble.
QueenGB chapter 16 . 10/14/2019
You go Edward! Punching Jacob, Now that’s a proper hello. Hehe
QueenGB chapter 15 . 10/14/2019
So mention of Dimitri so he came she left and can’t track her mind? That helps because while Felix is vile he’s not that bright. Unless you wrote him differently. Also Carlisle and Jasper asking around about the curse and Jake and James can’t be safe for Bella. I agree with Bella what is Jacobs end game with this search?
QueenGB chapter 14 . 10/14/2019
I want to give Bella a big hug. Esme must be losing her shit to do the same,
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