Gah this was beautiful! Soooo fluffy!

Save his people or save his lover? O god Grimm I fucking love you. And Ichigo you sexy beast ;). FANTASTIC sexy story!

This was freakin' awesome! Nothing gets a guy to pay attention better than the prospect of getting some nookie...except bacon lol...great story:)

The end is cute.

That was hot

I love it! That was definetly hot:)

I really enjoyed this tic :) I found a lot of grammer and word usage mistakes, which made it difficult to understand what you were writing. Other than that this was definitely entertaining.

Hahahahaha! Such a cute story :3
This fic actually reminded me of one Tumblr post I saw which features the boyfriend who was totally absorbed with his gaming that his girlfriend managed to masturbate behind him without him noticing anything at all :'
But good news for Ichigo there :3 Managed to get laid for just some clever seduction :D

This story was amazing! Especially the concept. I can imagine this happening definitely (-_•)

There was a nice sense of comical realism within this; with the entire Black Ops allusion and how it takes time away from relationships; especially from the theme you based it off. It offered a great construction into Ichigo's doubt of his relationship with Grimmjow, based off of Renji's own out take on the situation.

Renji had a great sense of characterisation in this and flowed very well as the dynamic friend Ichigo has; caring yet at the same time, has the rivalry that often breaks wind between his care for Ichigo and the true humour of the situation.

Shinji was another great impact; someone conveyed as entirely perverted connected well with Ichigo's prude like characterisation into which he even accepts advice from Shinji to grab Grimmjow on board for their activities. I think it connected entirely well with seducing Grimmjow into taking part in sex when breaking focus from his game to partake in another.

The setting and context of this also flowed very well within the amount of words you conveyed this and it also demonstrates your crafted writing style which is easy to understand and comes along effectively when making good use of figurative language.

The mature themes and concepts were also effective and maintain the creativity of writing a slash scene within a fic so you captured their sex very well, especially Grimmjow's own reflection of all the treasure in the world could replace Ichigo. Another great sense of a relationship that truly belongs.

Thanks for this!

Gamer Grimmjow sounds hot! Love how you made Ichigo a distraction to turn him away from gaming ;)

this made me "aww" at the end. its such a good story!

lol of course, black ops. That cursed game...I am a gamer girl and I love my halo and gears and borderlands. Just made it funny. Great for your first yaoi attempt dude I liked it :D

omg loved it soooo much!
really it was so cute and sexy!
haha keep up the good work ;)

i like!