Beautiful story. Read it before it was finished. Now it's done... wish Hinata could say no to Naruto story. I wonder how it would go. Thanks

at first, I can feel Hinata's misery. I'm really happy that they have happy ending and colorful journey

let me point out some mistakes.. Akio as naruto and sakura son is 12 in this and kitai is 16 but akio was born when kitan is 6 so how he is now 12? and when sasuke left hinata they were 19 and after six years they are like 25 or 26 so right now they are in there's mid thirties so why hinata feels old? and if I'm 16 and I'm going to be a sister so that was soooooo embarrassing for me and i know kitai's going to be a big sister soon..

I love Jinsei and Kitai! SasuHina as well, but their daughter with Gaara's son is just perfect! I really enjoyed reading this fanfic :D

awww I like the idea of sasuhina's daughter x gaara's son... its soo cute... anyway I like the whole story!

Beautiful!

I've read a lot of your stories and I feel like your Hinata is usually very, very OOC. Most of the time I feel like RTN!Hinata or Ino would fit the role better. :/ That you're only using Hinata because of family things. I don't know. That being said, you have lots of interesting stories and premises and you've finished a lot of your stories so that's a wonderful thing.

You write the best sasuxhina stories. I feel like every time I read a good one the author ends up being you. Great work!

WHAT AN INCREDIBLE CLIFF HANGER! My face is pasted onto the screen! I am really loving this story, good job! :)

i like it when hinata is shy...she seems to be so hypocrite in this fiction

omo, im reallly enjoying this

Sasuke is not dead. No. Absolutely not. I dare you to kill him off. I dare you. Him and Hina-chan are getting married.

Why do you say tsundae? It's Tsunade lol

Well obviously that lady was Karin…

I love the story but what I hate, and I'm not sure when this was written or how much you know about the naruto-universe, but sharing and aren't just activated that way. While I like the creativeness you added with adding that you had to get used to controlling the byakugan, etc., an Uchiha's sharingan activates when that person loses someone they love or have strong feelings for or strong connections with, hence the emphasis on [lost/breaking] bonds.