AHHHHH SO CUTE LOVE IT

eu adorei, gosto de histórias de Shuichi x Ryuichi, é uma pena que eu não encontre em português, mas eu amei essa, muito boa :)

This is amazing,And I'm just glad I'm not the only BLACK person that likes yaoi

You need to capitalize their names. I suppose it was good and all, nice storyline. But your grammar needs to be worked on , I'm sorry.

Aww that was super KAWAII! :D 3

AH! i love it! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEASE make a next chapter! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE?! Pretty Please with sugar on top? o.o *grabs hold of you leg (like a five yr old) and refuses to let go, screaming "PLEASE" the whole time* :3