Aw... that's so sweet... Duran acting a bit of a loner because he is thinking about his father... Nice! And Angela, always there to comfort Duran. Or is it Duran comforting her? Ah, who cares! Whatever it is, it's a nice story! ;)

Really good, Raye, but not up to you normal standard for style. Your story was good, but the actual writing seemed rushed and even clumsy in places. Im looking forward to teh rewrite. Reminds me of Blessed Love, but Angelas with someone else.

COOL! THIS IS THE FIRST FIC I'VE READ THAT SAYS ANGELA'S DAD IS RICHARD! Everyone always seems to miss it. It's cool seeing a fic that didn't! Please write one where Valda tells Angela! THAT would be cool!

nice story! it makes sense...i never thought about duran being that depressed. anyway, if you are going to rewrite this, you should add a little more background to the beginning. just a suggestion...

Is there another chapter? If yes, update update update...

Poor Duran. xx;

"...yet not one of them knew why a Knight of Gold could be so blue." You just might want to reword this to avoid unhoped-for mental imagery of... well, a knight wearing blue and gold. P

i simply love it!O can't describe it better, i'm so glad you write SD3 ffs! . and yes, angela must be the daughter from king richard XD~! i mean, when they meet richard in forcena and angela is in your team.. o cool xD~

"So?"

"So?.. SO? DO YOU EVEN GET WHAT I JUST SAID?"

i loved this oO! it's a bit mean and somehow angela knows exactly when to say it XD.. ahh, too good XD~ *loves the fic*