Reviews for Damnation or Salvation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Will this be continued? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, damn. Goid start. Just reading how brave Jack was in that situation. Willing to make that sacrifice. How noble. |
![]() ![]() Cool story. Please continue. Hope they're are more Jack and Other Jack moments. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update!? Such a good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing so far! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the plot, but what I love more is what you do with it. Your take on this story that you've created is what has made it enjoyable not just in the beginning, but all throughout. Please write, write, write! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GAWD! SO GOOD! Got me on the edge of my seat. I can not wait for the next chapter, literally. I'm gonna constantly check if you updated. XD loving all of this. and I am so glad you are bringing in certain parts of Pitch's past (not gonna spoil anything for anyone). Can't wait to see how this all plays out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() !Please continue writing this story! X3X |
![]() ![]() *Potential Spoilers* This fanfic is great! I love it so much! It appeals to my imagination so precisely, but I am pretty confused on some parts. Like I feel like sometimes time has passed between two paragraphs, but I couldn't tell because there were no indicators that time had passed, especially when Jack remembers Jamie, how long had he been captive? He couldn't have forgotten Jamie in one day right? And who the heck is "it"? And what is going on anyways with 'it' I mean, where are jack and 'it' when they were with each other? They are obviously in his head, yes but when did they both get there? What is It trying to accomplish/what are his motives? Who was that banging on the door? Why is It trying to seduce Jack? Why is he hot and not cold? And more importantly, is It being controlled by Pitch? I am a little confused around those parts, maybe that was just me being a careless reader (which I can often be) or maybe you were leading up to answering those in the next chapters...(?) but otherwise, you do you and don't forget to be awesome! |
![]() ![]() Oh shituzi I was screaming , "No don't fall for pitch's pedo charm ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hoping you continue this it's really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() !Please continue writing this story! X3X |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg, more more more, xo |
![]() ![]() WOW THIS IS GOOD! update this |