Uh oh. Chase you just gave Omi an idea. Hope this continues. Will it?

I can't believe I haven't read this yet!
X3
Keep it going!
I wanna see Chase's regrets

I really like this is story. It would make me very very happy that you updated this! asdfghjkl

Oh, yay! You updated! It's strange I was just thinking about your story today and wondering when you were going to update again. Then when I got home from work and checked my email I saw that you updated. Freaky right?

Omi, you sneaky dog you. And poor Dojo all that slamming his head into stuff must really hurt.

Anyway good chapter and I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work!

nice start hope you update soon

great first chapter and a great start to the adventure
even though its the first chapter it really made me want to read more of this story
so keep up the good work. _

Good start and interesting Shen Gong Wu. Aww, I'm not surprised that Raimundo biggest regret was when Omi turned evil. I remember how he cried at the end of Saving Omi. Oh, there just one little thing you have to fix. You put a 'c' instead of a 'k' in Kimiko's name.

Anyway, I'll look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!