Sounds like a cool, well written story. Unless by a "changed relationship" you mean love ( because that would be wrong since they are both girls) but I am sure that's not what it means. Overall I like it a lot . :-)

Please continue this story, I hope that Twist and Silver Spoon end up as more than friends, since they are a OTP for me.

Your story is awesome! A new look at two underrated ponies we almost never hear from! I like how they're changing as the story goes on, such as Twist getting her retainer removed and Silver Spoon starting to warm up to her new friends. I've always liked Twist but now I'll be paying attention to Silver Spoon in the show too. Poor Silver Spoon, I hope she can convince her mom to let her stay with her dad. :(
Keep the chapters coming (but take your time of course). -Dagny.

i... so gily it's was almost to hard to finsh

awesomeness

Poor scoots

hey i cant sign into my account right now but i just wanted to say i'm loving what you've done with the stroy so far you might want to look at the last few paragraph's the's a little grammer problem if you need to contact me reach me at: tick tock and brink

awesome i love the story so far keep up the good work
-brink

This is the best story ever! Please update!