please update

please update

Language. Now.

You havent updated in 2 years
Im really sad right now

Yea, the first chapter was iffy. But I kept reading and it got better. I liked the part where Jack was admiring the "really nice paper" :D

Lolol, its okay if you dont know our language, though Im not really good at speaking Tagalog myself, and I know that some of my grammaring skillz in Tagalog sux but gotta try to help people in need.

But I think you should find another person who speaks Tagalog well. And here it is!

"You're cute, but I don't think that even you can look good as a homeless person." - "Cute ka, pero sa tingin ko na hindi ka magadang tingnan kahit na isa kang pulubi."

Yay! ;DD

No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no! This story is so good! Ahhhh! Can't wait for the next chap!

Okaaay, so uhm, I really like the idea of your fic, honestly it's pretty exciting xD
Thing is, I would maybe be interested in continuing your story but I would also like to know how you would have continued, so I think you shouldn't just stop writing this fic if you still have ideas :D
I've never published a fanfiction on this site so it would probably be my first one and I wouldn't publish it directly after adopting it, because I would probably change the plot a bit so it would basically become another story with a pretty similar plot? I don't know... and that would take pretty much time of course and since there is always school, I don't know if I would be quicker to update... but I would really like to give storywriting a try and with this fic I wouldn't have to start from zero you know?
So, I hope for an answer :D

Jessymon 3

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Okay I'm done. This was a cool chapter, it was kind of confusing, but not altogether unpleasantly so. More... Mysterious. I loved it! I almost wanna adopt this story, but I don't know that I'd do it justice, or have time to update, so... No. Well I hope that if someone else takes it they'll do as well as you have, because that's gonna be hard. ;) anyway, great story! I'm kind of hoping no one takes it so it'll continue to be quality material :) but I understand if you can't do it fast. I suppose I'll just have to live with slow updating. *sighs dramatically* lol jk. This story is worth it.

Mother Nature is mean.

SHUT UP! Your writings not bad at all! If I made a fanfic,I would probably think it was horrible too,but Honestly! It's absolutely awesome! :)

Grrrrr, I'm scary XD. I laughed when I read that in your reply. A little scary. Hm. #lifegoals lol. Sorry for taking so long to read this, I was at an amusement park yesterday and almost puked when I got home cuz I overheated, then I pretty much passed out from exhaustion BUT NONTHELESS I finally got to read it this morning and can I just say that this is an awesome chapter! That's pretty much every review I leave on this story but I can't imagine you getting sick of hearing it so I will continue where it applies lol. I laughed really hard when Tooth said she was gonna give Mother Nature a quarter. XD XD XD The part where Jack was dreaming was really descriptive, with just enough vagueness to make it feel mysterious and separate from when he's awake. I don't know if that makes sense, but bottom line, I loved that part. I got really excited when I found out this had been updated and I will be waiting patiently (or not so patiently, depending) for the next chapter XD XD XD

Epic! More please!

Bad dreams.

:D