this is my 8th time rereading this piece of art..i hope you're still around and i just want to let you know there are many people still reading this.

Plot is interesting. Rukia was originally created to be the main character in bleach but it was later changed. I love Rukia’s oc. Thats why i dont see Rukia helping an arrancar or nursing one. She is smart and thinks 10 steps ahead so seeing that she is in a lion’s den, being reckless and foolish is not an option. Pulling off a real Rukia is really tough especially when u want to insert drama and romance. Ur story is nice but im all for Rukia since its rare seeing female leads to be at par with the main character. So seeing how u portray Rukia sets me off. Just not for me. But i hope u continue writing. And one more confusion is that how did Rukia turn into a seer. Hogyoku doesn’t give that power as its capacity is base on turning hollows into arrancars and regeneration.

Absolutely caught by your story! It's indeed well written and the angst nicely drenches every scene you've set! I love Rukia's inner conflicts and how she manages her anxiety and her confusion when it comes to Aizen -that guy gives me the creeps by the way-. Despite her fear, she possess a strong character and an unwavering loyalty towards her friends, even though she's emotionally invested with Hueco Mundo and some of its 'citizens' (I was delighted with Stark and Grimmy relationships with our heroine).
That said, I want to mention I've noted some rude and cowardly anonymous reviews left here, and hell, I can't stand those kind of envious haters, so my message to them is please, keep swimming in your pools of envy and hatred and don't come back again.
One last thing, about procrastination: don't feel bad to delay your chapters! I mean, I'm a huge procrastinator (it took me three years to retake my main story, so what else can I point? XD), but every time I write down my ideas, it's because I feel like. And I believe this has to be the most important reason for us writers in fanfiction, to truly enjoy writing our stories, setting our scenes and sketching our characters' personalities and their interactions.
Looking forward to read your last chapter.

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Wait! Did Rukia sleep with Aizen? Is that the deal she made?! Ohmigosh. I hope you update soon (with details!) I'm dying to know!

Really sad to hear this is ending in another chapter. Seemed like there was a lot more that needed to be covered: flashbacks to Rukia's time in the temple, Aizen's involvement with this, her scarring punishment, Aizen's goal (don't really know what he wants to achieve in your universe), him finally breaking Rukia (seemed like it was heading down that road) etc.
So yeah was kinda hoping to see more as you have a really interesting and intricate plot that could cover a lot. Maybe a sequel/prequel?

Please update, I need resolve

I hope you update soon

I really love this fic

First of all, this story is really really good. It has all the things that I'd ever liked to see in it. I don't know why it is so underrated tho.
And I love all the moments especially the one between Aizen and Rukia.
Maybe after finish this story, I hope you think about writing another one with this couple cos there are like 10 stories of them in FF.
I really wish to see more from you.
Also, thank you for sharing this amazing story with us.

Love your story, especially the way it is written

Thank you for coming back! Poor Stark I really loved how you made me care about him...almost too much. I am so hyped for the reunion :) Great update and I'm both excited and sorrowful for the next and final chapter.

Awww...Byakins.

Wow - that is going to be a lot to wrap up in one chapter! Good luck!

This is a awesome story, I love it! Can't wait for the next update. :)

I've just read your story and I enjoyed it quite a bit. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I do have to agree with an earlier post that Aizen's characterization is off but its not like he is a fully fleshed out, 3 dimensional character in the manga either. I just see it as Aizen's character being changed for the sake of Rukia's story.

You did a good job with the smut. It could of been a dry mechanical description of sex with no passion or a teen 'Teehee...look what i wrote!' sort of scene. But you managed to keep it both interesting and mature. The sex serves the story, it doesn't replace it. That said if your going to give Rukia a harem than by all means use it, don't shy away from it. Its the nature of the beast. Let Rukia explore it and them.

Finally I really love what you did with Rukia's character. It was only a few days ago that I wondered what would of happened if the damned stone decided to stick with Rukia. While I imagined something very different your take is both clever and interesting. Keep it up! Rukia herself is true to her character as well, sacrificial and passionate but with an adult's twist. I like her quite a bit.