love the fan fiction very intresting

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That was just AMAZING! Definitely going to favorite list...
Keep up the good work..
We'll be waiting for the sequel..

Love the story and the picture!

This was a delightful read!
I'm a sucker for crime fiction and for fairy tail, even more for Nalu, and oh boy you delivered! I absolutely adore this story, and I had a lot of fun reading it. My only complaint (Not exactly a complaint, just a preference) is that it seemed a bit too easy for Natsu and the police to figure out the crimes and all, I would have liked a bit more suspense, but I still loved reading this.
You did a good job, homie

I love this fanfic sooooooooooo much! I've read it for 5 times I think xD I still can't get enough.
I love a story which combines mystery, adventure and romance. It's just perfect! And it has my OTP too :DD
I love this story so much, I feel like doing a comic over it xD But I don't know if my skills are good enough for this :P I might try, idk xD
Amazing. Best fanfic ever :D

"big fan of cop n romance story luv it"!

I love this! :3 huge fan of cop shows too lol! Got a favourite? :3

Hey girl/dude! (Sry idk ur gender) ur story is awesome! It is written like it is reality lik u have rly experienced it! Ur a pro! Haha not to destroy this rather happy mood but i THINK, juz thinking, that MAYBE the story wld be more interesting (its very interesting alr) if the culprit was not so.. um obvious? Mayb giv him a little more mystery and make it shocking. Lik mayb instead of Brain being the culprit maybe a inside person, someone who they nvr suspected.. BUT i no its rly rly rly difficult so to get the mood back! I LUV UR STORY, LIK RLY RLY RLY SRSLY! 3 hahah.. ja ne -animeshojo:)

Good job. I like how you contrasted natsu and lucy

Wonderful! This was so heartwarming and cute! I love love love crime solving shows as well, and this feels like it came straight out of NCSI or something. (':

This was a great story!

I am a sucker for Crime fiction.
Absolutely.
And this adaptation with fairytail just makes me squeal like a little girl. I would pick this over any other fluffy romances that revolves around nalu. I really would.
It may not be a fanfiction for everyone but I believe this is one of the most fulfilling NaLu Fanfics I've read in a long time.

I didn't even have to skip any chapters, I read throughout it.
(Yes, I am a lazy-ass at reading. I hate drama. I skip drama if I have to.)
This, is just. It's amazing.

Loved the story

Just wondering did u based this off of castle because i love that show! :-)