Reviews for The New Apprentice
Zela Night chapter 7 . 9/26/2018
I am going haha over the 'asking for permission at every stage' thing. It is so hot.
The emotional connection between them is wonderful.
I adore this story.
angel of darkeness chapter 7 . 2/18/2018
this is one of the best stories
Black Bloody Rose Dragon chapter 7 . 9/5/2017
The story is good I like it an damn good job on the smut XD update plllllzzzzzzzz
xedrix666 chapter 7 . 6/29/2016
i know this is super late to even be considering this type of pairing, i still want to put in a review. this is the CUTEST fanfic ive ever read! wish it was still being continued to see how it will unfold with bean! it would be super naughty to try and take jack away and make him a slave of sorts to add to it. or possibly wuya joining to get at chase and jack in some way. still wouldve been nice to see how this story unfolded and ended.
Dude.cx chapter 4 . 8/25/2015
Omg! XD
brittany chapter 7 . 8/20/2013
omg so cute, kiawii, smutty, slash i loved it
KingFluffybuns chapter 7 . 8/7/2013
great. XS I wasn't hopping to smut so soon. dmn. I love you. XD
KingFluffybuns chapter 6 . 8/7/2013
Oh! I looking forward for the next chapter! :333
I love it so much, I'm so curious of what could happen x333 go on! more!
take your time! (・ω・)ノ
CrossfireBullet chapter 6 . 8/7/2013
PLOT TWIST HANNIBAL ENDS UP CONVINCING JACK AND HE BETRAYS CHASE AND DRAMA DRAMA GASP!

*takes a deep breath and calms down*

I'm really curious in what Hannibal is planning. Knowing Hannibal's, it's gotta be something really terrible. And you know, I've always like the idea of "branches" of Xiaolin monks apart from the main branch. I like to think that in let's say, Master Monk Guan's temple, there is also team of four young warriors.

And LOL at e thMulan reference XD I somehow see Chase to be a Mulan fan and whatnot.
Lithium2016 chapter 5 . 6/24/2013
AHHH! It's so cute! I really love how sexy, but truly sweet Chase is. Whoa... Never thought I'd be saying those words. O_o
I think the Wuya thing is fricking awesome! The enchanted door made me laugh until I about died. The fun Chase is very epic. Thank you for bringing him to life! :)
-Melissa
KingFluffybuns chapter 5 . 6/14/2013
this is great! :D i love it! :DDD I will totally wait for the next! :D
CrossfireBullet chapter 4 . 5/6/2013
This is story is so awesome o_o
Chase is a but mushy and nice but heck, whatever, love conquers all! 3
Write on please :)
Bella chapter 4 . 3/26/2013
Oh my goodness..l this is exactly what I've been looking for :D You have to continue with it, please!
SoulMore chapter 4 . 2/25/2013
FAN!
Nordra88 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
This is lovely story to read!
Chase is just a bit too softy for my liking, so far at least. But it's only my opinion. Good work!
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