MINDFUCK

Um...i don't know what to think... I mean it was great, good writing and entertaining but then at the end... Really? I feel cheated right now :(

Wow just freaking wow! Mind blown! It was the biggest troll of the centre of fanfiction ever! The entire thing... I can't finish that sentence for future readers sake. I loved it though. Great writing. The plot was freaking badass from beginning to end. Though I was starting to feel like we deviated from the SPN cannon a whole lot and focused on the kids and the drama. But the characters remain themselves through the dialogue. Cas not so much but he was excuse since he was in that predicament. I feel like Deans family would so like that for reals and things wouldn't be easy for him to get there. I fell in love with Leo and Robby. That's why I like to think like Dean about his belief on what happened. Glass half full optimism instead of the obvious. Lol anyways great story. I enjoyed it greatly, your an awesome writer.

Brilliant! :D
But biggest mindfuck ever, just so you know.

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Baby died! He went out swinging tho! :) So sad...but the perfect way for the BAMF guardian angel to go.

TT
This is the saddest but most beautiful thing I've ever read. Poor Baby, he keeps giving and emo Dean always acts like a dick. I really hope he doesn't die...
Excellent writing. Really transports the reader there, and makes the characters real. Also your plot is so utterly original. love this to bits.

Ansiel

I just realized I've never read the last chapter. I am honestly in shock... I did not see that coming and I'm a little heart broken that it wasn't real. At least Dean's happy though. Still love the story and you are still not allowed to take it down.

Reading it for the second time and it still breaks my heart. Why!? Literally sobbing right now.

This ending was amazing. Great story, thanks for writing and sharing it. :)

Aaaaaah, cliffhanger?! This chapter with the kiddos and time-traveling back to help young!Dean was just so adorable.

Whoa, this chapter was epic!

Pie & Prejudice. ROFL I love your chapter titles, they are great. I cannot do that. I used to try. There were times when I literally could not update because I couldn't think of a chapter title.
I loved Sam's appearance in this chapter. Cousins, w00t! Also thrilled to see 48 make another appearance. :)

Aw, Baby. I wonder where angels go when they die? I like thinking he's with his Other and his twin brother somewhere, having Impala adventures.
Excited for the new baby. It's true that with their long life-spans, the age difference between the three kids won't matter much in a relatively short time. Another great chapter.

I work at a school, so I am nitpicky about the school-related portions, sorry. I wouldn't have the principal say 'asses' in front of Dean and Cas. Even under duress, principals don't swear at parents, at least not in my experience. LOL If Robbie and Leo went to my school, Dean would have had a LOT more parent-teacher conferences. ;)
I loved Cas and Dean's fantasizing about buying a house, and the broken fan sound was a nice motif, I could totally picture the scene.

Soooo happy the nuclear family is finally back together. Six years is a long time, but the boys are still young enough that Cas will really be able to be an influence on them. Good timing. I also loved the little scene where the boys got to pick out whatever they wanted to wear. Very cute and also realistic. Kids will pick out the most whack combinations, I swear.