I addition to your excellent emotionally descriptive story, I am impressed with your ability to keep Hook and Emma so very much in character. Hopefully, you finished the show and know where these characters actually ended up in canon. Would love to see you tackle their story now! But if that is not to be, thank you for sharing your talent in this fandom with the stories you have written.

This was lovely. :-)

Loveeeeeeeeeeee! Really creative and great feels. love the CS banter too

Lovely. Enjoyed it. Being witness to the beginning of their relationship made this perfect. Thanks for writing. I look forward to reading your other OUAT stories.

Very good. A goodbye kiss. I don't think Emma hates him. She's disappointed because she hasn't realized that revenge is all Hook has had for so long. He doesn't have anything to fill the void if he gives up on revenge. Cora's words hurt, "You give your heart to a woman who won't even call you by your real name." Ouch. This is very well written.

Hundreds of years of loneliness, that was what Hook experienced and it's heartbreaking. Emma is afraid of sharing anything with him.

Ruthless, charming and determined. Accurate description of Hook. Henry was delightful. Emma is the most fearful brave person Hook has met. Interesting!

Excellent first chapter. Looking forward to the rest.

Dang, girl. This is good. I normally don't review unless the writer has enough talent to keep me interested. Well done, and keep going please :)
-Sunny

is there more of this? I for one would be interested to read, if there were more. Lovely characterization.

Truly enjoyed the story :) Thank you so much for sharing it!

Only a couple more weeks until we resume, and with any luck, we'll be getting much more Captain Swan in the very near future ;D

This version would have been so much fun in the actual story line :) Either way, I'm greatly enjoying it!

I wasn't going to review until the end, but this chapter gave me pause. So good! So very well written. I can't wait to see what will happen next! :D

I stumbled on this when I was looking for something to read by my favourited authors and I am so glad I did because this was so well done. You made me laugh several times with your witty dialogue (case in point, when Emma says Hook only has a few minutes and his response). I loved the scenes with David and Henry and thought you had a real mastery of all the characters. It was a joy to read, thanks for writing!

I really enjoyed this story, though I found myself wanting you to continue it.

Much better without Greg Mendel in it. If only he'd stayed in a coma on the show. :)

I loved watching the change in their relationship and you did a great job capturing Hook's innuendos and personality.

And I kinda wish there was an epilogue to the epilogue...