Reviews for Steel
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2019
That was so great!
levios chapter 1 . 7/1/2017
I thought this was very very good! It was funny, interesting, sweet and well written! I really enjoyed reading it but I personally didn't feel like the ending did the story justice. It doesn't feel like an ending and I guess you were going for that but I think you had something great going on and I think it would become a very interesting story if you continued this! Still, great story so far and I like how you mix humour with emotions! Would love to read more if you ever felt like writing another chapter :)
Dr.B.Damned chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Bloody HELL! This genuinely is fantastic! Well done, excellent work!
stormseaker chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
This made me melt. Dorks, the pair of them.
Wonderfully done, thank you for sharing it :)
sakuradancer3 chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
I hesitated to review since we only get one review per chapter and I know that I will read this over and over again.

Brilliant. Fucking brilliant. Excuse my language.

Your metaphors about the gun wounds was beautiful and perfect. Lovely and accurate and just...ack.

I've read dozens of fics this week (just got into the fandom) and this is by far in the top five. Be proud. I loved it.
Kokoroyume chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Great story :)
starrysummernights chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Wow, I really loved this story. You have the characters so "in character" that it just makes the entire fic so easy to read and believable. Quick note though, the cabbie was shot in the shoulder, or the heart, not the brain- as you wrote at the first of the fic. Not detracting from the beauty that was this story. I was left wanting more...I want Sherlock to finally admit his feelings- because I know John will wait forever to hear it. :D Sequel?
Nostalgic Beauty chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
I loved it when John commented that it took Sherlocj less time to come to terms with his attraction than he thought. ;)
LittleMissDreamer7 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
:O HOLY SNITCH! This is amazing, you understand? AMAZING! *begs on knees* I need another chapter! I want Sherlock to admit it, pleeeeassse!
wholockian729 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Really quite good! I think you captured them both well
k8ec chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Pretty much perfect! I'm not really a Johnlock shipper but I loved this story! :)
petrified078 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
And I thought John was the one who denies the Johnlock connection. :)) Oh God, but this fic - shivers all around! And you got them down pat! Thank you!
ForeverShippingJohnlock chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
PLEASE PLEASE PLEAAASSEEE DO ANOTHER CHAPTER :D i would love it if u continued this! Anyway, this was fantastic, i loved how confident john was. Incredibly written, brilliant job :)
Ashay chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Oh, very good! This is a completely plausbile storyline of how they come to resolve the UST. I really appreciate someone treating John as a confident adult willing to take the first step. So often he is portrayed as being completely in the dark or paralyzed by a sexual identity crisis. Playing on Sherlock's implied inexperience is nice, I would only suggest he, too, is older than 30. Thank you for a wonderful story and I can't wait for another chapter.
hjohn302 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Love this! Would so love to see a follow up to it! :)
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