does she say meow after every sentence... that's pretty cringy ngl

I honestly loved this. It was a fun read :3 The entire time I was trying to figure out her center, her purpose, and I loved the fact it was belief. It makes sense and it fits her personality. Thanks for writing this story. You're really the only story I found that was a girl falls into another universe story. I adore those kinds of stories :v

If she says awww when Easter bunny a small oh my God please yes

I think option b

This was so gooooood. It's been a long time since I've read fanfics and I'm glad I started up again with this one.

i hope u can make a sequel of this , because it is so beautiful and romantic, and i hope they'll have more adventures...

A

OMG! So beautiful!

Wonderful story so far, but with the whole rabbits are a pest and not even kept as pets from where the OC is from and I'm assuming where you are from as well. Hahaaha, I'm from Australia too and I'm gonna take a guess and say you're either from or living in Queensland, since you can't even take rabbits across the borders into QLD.

Did you know that most people are lucky to get a single review per chapter? Most people average between 0.5-2.5 of a review for each chapter in their stories, your story averages 22.5 reviews per chapter! You should just be thankful you got so many.

Ok, so your protagonist does magic tricks. I could conceivably get into that. There aren’t many stories where the main character has that as a talent (American Gods by Neil Gaiman comes to mind). It was an interesting concept, but then you gosh darn blew it. I stopped taking this story seriously the second the protagonist fucking MEOWED. Up until that point, the writing was alright, but it feels like a quirk that you gave her specifically so that other people could give her shit for it.* Magic tricks I can understand; they’re a hobby that people might make fun of, and asking someone to give them up entirely would be unreasonable. But the meowing? You’ve broken my suspension of disbelief IN THE FIRST CHAPTER.

*Either that, or this is a self-insert, in which case I apologize profusely for mocking you.

okay first sentence and i already can't finish, sorry but belittling people by just what the wear, no matter how scandalous or daring it is doesnt justify being called sluts, and then you follow up with the cliché ugh there goes the weirdo outcast girl

No Sherlock Holmes, but certainly John Watson (if you didn't know Jude Law who voice acts Pitch plays Watson in Robert Downey Jr's Sherlock Holmes).

What do you mean Pitch's first name is Boogey? His name is Pitch Black, he is the boogeyman. His name isn't Boogey Man, it's Pitch Black.

You write in such a nice way! I'm so excited to keep reading this!