awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! awsome story though i laughed at some parts!

i love it! your oneshot was so cute

I looove your story concept! It's really touching and sweet! To top everything, Amuto is my favorite pair in Shugo Chara! XD

Oh, and I'd like to pinpoint several grammatical mistakes and punctuation mistakes as well, if you don't mind.

Be careful with 'your' and 'you're' usages. They might look similar at first glance, but they have totally diferrent meaning. Your is used for possessions (e.g your sanctuary, your crutch, etc.) Meanwhile you're is the shortened version of you are. There's no way you'd say your okay instead of you are okay (you're okay), right?

Moving on to the punctuation mistakes. I'll just show you an example.

"Excuse me." Ikuto said. (This is false)
"Excuse me," Ikuto said. (See? The only difference is the period and the comma before the last quotation mark.)

Well, those were just few mistakes I managed to spot in your story. I don't know if I could find any other. Overall, you did a great job in writing your story and I love it! Sorry for the long review!

Yay! Happily ever afters are awesome! I love this story! Especially when they FINALLY get together! I mean six months! It took them long enough! AMUTO FOREVER! 3

This did not suck. I loved it!

Aw, such a lovely story. It was REALLY great, loves it. Teehee. :D

Sooo amazing

Aweeesome!this plot and all may be a little confusing but overall I enjoyed a loot:D youre fantastic and this story is great*-*

That was actually pretty cute. Very long but very good. I like your style of writing. Awesome job! Bye for now! xD