Fuck your ANs are way too long

There are no unit digits for the SAT score.

uhm, its a little strange, but its pretty good. Nice job :)

Lol practicalypretty's so mad. Jelly much? go update your own useless story called "your life" and while you're at it go die with aids cause no one cares if you go to Harvard, you're most probably
talking shit because your life sucks so bad. And btw, who would marry such a resentful b1tch like u.

Lol practicalypretty's so mad. Jelly much? go update your own useless story called "your life" and while you're at it go die with aids cause no one cares if you go to Harvard, you're most probably talking shit because your life sucks so bad. And btw, who would marry such a resentful b1tch like u.

I hate you and I'm not kidding you are a really bad person, who I think should just go die in a hole. You're such a bad person, friend, and writer. You can't even update a stupid story. Ohhh so you got into a good school. My family has gone to Harvard and I'm not letting them down, so I will go to a better school than you. My boyfriend and I graduate this year, and we have promise rings. I will get married and have kids whilst you die alone. I am Valedictorian and best in my year. I also do many out of school activities. I hope this is one of longest reviews you have ever gotten, and I'm happy because it's a flame. Sorry for being mean, but I feel as thigh someone needed to tell you your world isn't perfect. My brother was also recently diagnosed with Leukemia. I have a hard life and have tried so hard to make it perfect. Please take this to heart. I hope you understand what I'm trying to say. I would say more, but sadly my niece needs me to play with her and my nephew.

I hate you and I'm not kidding you are a really bad person, who I think should just go die in a hole. You're such a bad person, friend, and writer. You can't even update a stupid story. Ohhh so you got into a good school. My family has gone to Harvard and I'm not letting them down, so I will go to a better school than you. My boyfriend and I graduate this year, and we have promise rings. I will get married and have kids whilst you die alone. I am Valedictorian and best in my year. I also do many out of school activities. I hope this is one of longest reviews you have ever gotten, and I'm happy because it's a flame. Sorry for being mean, but I feel as thigh someone needed to tell you your world isn't perfect. My brother was also recently diagnosed with Leukemia. I have a hard life and have tried so hard to make it perfect. Please take this to heart. I hope you understand what I'm trying to say. I would say more, but sadly my niece needs me to play with her.

Wow. This had a good plotpoint. Both in terms of Kronos' semi-return, and this little Percabeth moment. It was a good idea. Nice touch with bringing in Tyson as well. I liked the idea.
I've noticed you've been writing in present tense a lot more in the past few chapters. It's fine to have Percy's thoughts out there, in fact it's good, but you shouldn't use it to tell the story. I'm not going to mention the negatives that much, since they'll pretty much be the same throughout the whole story and there's not much you can do to change past chapters.

I'm going to be taking another short break from this story, mainly because of schoolwork and stuff. I'll get back to this in a week or two, and keep it up until then!

This chapter was so sweet. I can't wait until annabeth finally regains all of he memory.
Percabeth 4eva :)
I have to go to bed, by I can't wait for the next update, gal pal :)

Wow. The beginning of this chapter was actually pretty decent. It had good paragraphs, and was able to sum up the past events really well. There was even a bit of characterization through the little memory of Annabeth getting the dagger.
Pretty good.

So. I said I wasn't going to read this story, but I was bored and thought I'd give it another go. For some reason, I'm liking it more than the first few chapters.

I think the main reason I like it more is because the mere fluff is winning me over. It was fluffy at the start, but now it's so light and soft it's gaseous. You couldn't have achieved this level of adorableness in the first few chapters, which is why I liked these more.

Another good touch was Annabeth's dream about Luke and her mentioning that Percy was telling a story about him. His reaction was touching to read.

Basically, the fluffiness in this story's enough to keep me going. There still isn't that much detail and is a little choppy, but I can overlook a lot of it.

Keep it up!

Nice this story is really good its a shame it doesn't have more reviews

Sorry for the late rep. Yup! So glad that you're a thomasian! Welcome to the family! Go USTe! If you need advice, message me anytime! I'll be glad to be of service! And for my review! You're amazing! Can't wait till the next update! :)

Awe! They kissed!:D Go Percabeth;) can't wait till the update:)

Or not...