I loved this so much aggggh it’s amazing!

I've read your Harry Potter fics, but I'm so glad I stumbled across your Avatar fics finally! Love the way you characterize everyone, and this plot was just *chef's kiss* perfect

I could read 100 chapters of this and still not be satisfied. You're amazing.

That was an awesome read.

Awwwwww this was too precious. I loved the way they fell for each other. This is by far one of my favorite stories

Very cringey

This was so cute! I love how Katara started to figure out who the blue spirit was even before he showed her. Most blue spirit stories Katara completely freaks out once she finds out its Zuko. I personally think it’d be more realistic if she accepted him like she did in this. Good job loved the writing! I finished this in a day and I’m a little sad that it’s over haha!

I can’t believe I just now came across this story. You are just a fabulous writer. I’ve liked everything I’ve read from you so far and this was absolutely wonderful. Stayed up until 3:15am to finish it! Zuko and Katara were just perfect in this. Even when Zuko was ‘bad’, I firmly believe that he would’ve protected Katara had something like this happened in canon. ‘Zuko Alone’ was such a game changer and showed just how much humanity Zuko had, even when he was confused and lost. This story shows that conflict wonderfully. And I honestly think that Katara healing him in that cave would’ve changed the rest of the series. So that was a nice touch here. One question though, I’ve noticed in your fics (at least the ones I’ve read) that you usually heal his scar. Why is that? There’s the obvious reason of he needs it. But I’m just curious. I personally think the scar has helped shape him into who he becomes. Andddd Zuko without his scar looks sooo much like his father and like a completely different person. If you haven’t seen it, there’s a post on Pinterest that shows several shots of him without his scar and it’s like something is missing. Anyway, this was perfect. And just what I needed tonight. Thank you for another amazing fic!

Haha, so your collection was so good it had me coming back for more :P I love how colorful and balanced your writing is, and you capture the personalities of these characters so well. Jeez. I am just amazed by this.

(side note, you did not hold back on the cheese, either XD cheesyyyy zutara)

OMG! Where have you been hiding this gem?! My god, I just couldn't stop reading after accidentally coming across it—that’s how good it was! Girl, it was an AMAZING read start to finish and I was 1000000% hooked from the start... Hell, I even started screaming like some crazy person and high-fiving the stranger next to me on the bus... And yes, the kid thought I was nuts too and so did everyone there, but I didn't care... All I wanted was to read what happens next. OK—OK, I’ll shut up now because my heart is racing a 100 mph now and I'm finding it hard to breathe. Still, I'm begging you...plz-plz consider writing a sequel... Oh my god, just the thought of reading about Katara's & Zuko's life after the 100 years’ war is making me want to start screaming again, but I better not do that right now... Because my mother and sister are already giving me funny looks as it is. Still the thought of reading about Zuko & Katara getting married and having little princes & princess of their own... OMG! Can you just imagine how totally precious & beautiful they would be given who their parents are?! Hell, I can! Or the antics that will ensuing with Iroh and crazy uncle Sukka doting over them? So plz-plz consider it, and THX so much for taking the time to write and share this truly awesome and well written story with us all... You're truly a very talented writer to say the least!
PS: Faved you and this story.

Try to vary your sentences. You’re very fond of semicolons. You’ll sometimes put 2 in the same paragraph.

Interesting story line, not one I had considered before, but I liked it, and you characterized Zuko and Katara realistically. Nice job!

Where did Iroh suddenly come from? You left that unexplained. I did like the start of the story where the reader kind of falls right into the action, but this part is unhinged.

Sweet story although a little bit cheesy...but sweet

Very nice story! Great ending too!