Interesting. I could see this fleshed out easily in a story. I wish I could see inside Jesse's head.

wow...just wow. interesting take on what might have been.

This does not feel like Hank at all, I think the writer really missed the mark. I tried to read a few other fics by this writer but they all feel so ooc, I am not confident she/he is well versed in the show.

Interesting!

Interesting but how does Hank wind up in the same place as Pinkman? Coincidence? Back story?

Skyler hates Jesse Pinkman, I have a difficult time accepting she would leave her baby to him and not Marie and Hank, her family and people she loves. I really do not buy Hank turning away from his long lost niece, either. So you lost me with this one, sorry. It seems like a very contrived way to put Jesse Pinkman with a new child rather than a story born of Skyler or Hank's actual character. Sure the guy is great with kids but you could have at least come up with a believable concept.

Poor Marie. She's not even directly in this story, and yet I feel bad for her. All throughout the series, she's always had the best intentions for the family, but she doesn't have all the facts. In Season 1, she though Junior, rather than Walt, was doing pot, so she had Hank take him to the Crystal Palace to scare him straight. In Season 4, she insisted Walt come to the safety of the Schraeder house, not realizing that his being away was the reason they were safe. I can almost hear what she'd say if she found out Jesse was raising Holly. "But Hank, that's illegal! There must be some kind of...'Legal guardianship' loophole. I mean, you and I should be legal guardians of our niece! Now go get her from that dopehead this instant!"