I know this has story has been finished for a while now, but wow. You really found a way to capture what made Katawa Shoujo such a great game. That ending was both happy and sad, it was great. You've got a great mind for writing and I hope to read more from you.

Yeah...

...it seemed like even medical professionals aren't sure if SA is a dominant or a recessive disease, so there's still a chance...

...well, even if it was dominant, there'd still be a chance, though perhaps less of one because Yuki confirmed that both of her parents were positive. Such a sad ending...

...I approve. Personally, I'm horrible at making stories with sad endings, so I admire anyone who can do it convincingly.

...Except not the end. It's too happy, and besides, having not started on this until it was complete, I can see that there's still an epilogue. The prologue implied too much sadness...

Hmm...it's easy to forget that Ryuuji's disease is degenerative, too. At least his isn't actually killing him.

:( ...This fic is so sad.

Oh yeah, it's really not easy. I've found that it only works for me if I'm in the right frame of mind (read: feeling especially perverted). And even then, it's rarely true erotica.

This is adorable. I love it.

...Yeah. Back to the humor, obviously.

Yeah, Japan's a bit weird like that. Apparently it has something to do with when KFC was going international.

Interesting turn of events.

Ah, yes, I didn't even catch that. The perspective flip was a welcome, unexpected twist, and as for Yuki's realization about her fanfiction being based on her relationship with Ryuuji, now we've gotten into recursive meta. So crazy.

You did your homework. I actually looked up the disease to see if it was hereditary just before starting on this chapter, so I was surprised to find that it was mentioned in this very chapter. Poor Ryuuji...and poor Yuki.

Yeah, I thought that diagnosis seemed familiar. Yuki's disability is the same as the OTHER April Fools' love interest, Saki.

Yeah, I know. It made me wonder if we were getting back onto a route, because after all, Hisao didn't die in this one. So you wrote the whole thing in advance?

...wait..."turkey sandwich"?

Nah, it's cool. I really like the relationship between these two; it's very well done. And the Katawa Shoujo references are great (Emi's is one of my favorite routes).

I'm convinced now that Ryuuji is really Kyon from Haruhi Suzumiya. This isn't the first time I've felt a Haruhi reference in here. This story is just too cute.

Love the HIMYM reference. And, yeah, just remembered that you said English wasn't your first language...I don't think "canteen" is actually the word you're looking for. "Cafeteria", maybe?

Ah, so you're one of those who sometimes writes numerous chapters at once, too? I used to be even more like that before my chapters started getting longer.

So, yeah, my suspicion's pretty much been confirmed. Yuki responded with "Yeah, YOU do" when Ryuuji said "WE still have a long life ahead of us."