Oh why have you not updated in soooo long? Please at least come to a good stopping point. It's been way too long.

Gah him being so sweet and calling her baby all the time...blah makes my heart hurt in sickly sweet way lol

Uhh...yah...I just read your AN for the chapter and it made me really nervous. I know you can't ignore Jennifer because the whole season basically revolved around defeating her. But, you can change her interactions with Derek. Honestly, I don't see how you will be able to do anything else, considering Derek and Scarlett are mates. Since they are mates and they have a bond...which allows the other to feel the others emotions...it would be HORRIBLE to make Derek a cheater. Even if you break them up beforehand, its still like cheating considering they have a nearly unbreakable bond. I realize I keep ranting about this, but it just makes me really nervous in any fanfiction. I have read several fanfictions where the couple were awesome together, but the Jennifer thing just blew it out of proportion for me. I just hate it in love stories when one of the people cheat. There is no way that is true or real love. Once again, I offer my services if you plan on keeping Derek and Jennifer from being Derek and Jennifer.

So. They are mates. That's freaking awesome. I know I have reviewed before...but, only on some of the later chapters because that is when I began to read this. My point is I probably said *begged* you not to get Derek and Jennifer to hook up. That still stands. I mean, now that they are mates, well...because they are mates...that should offer Derek some protection against Jennifers seduction. If you have trouble thinking of a different plot line to write, that doesn't involve them hooking up, you can pm me for some ideas when the time comes. Only if you want/need to, though.

Hi. This has been a great story so far, a bit too harsh on Derek and Scarlets relationship, but still good. That being said, I am responding to one of your recent notes about Jennifer and Derek. I really hope you dont make Derek cheat because that would suck. I agree that the Darach thing is pretty important, but as Jennifer and Dereks relationship wasnt really showcased all that much, i dont think they as a couple are important. However, if you still want the Derek/Jennifer interaction, maybe you could make her try to seduce him or poison him with wolfsbane or do something to him that makes him trust her and that could be a point of contention between him and Scarlet. Just please think about changing it enough so that he doesnt actually cheat.

Oh interesting twist I like I like it a lot! No spoilers for this season I'm in Italy and haven't seen it yet. Please update this story soon! Wonder how Peter is going to use Scarlet to revive himself from the dead. And what will Derek do? Love protective Derek.

I loved the update! I can't wait for more. Update soon!

Love it so far. Please please please update soon because I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

I really don't like that you want I put the whole Jennifer & Derek thing but it's your story just please don't let him sleep
With her! Please don't! And if it does I don't want Scarlett to forgive him so easily I want her to make him jealous too.

I loved the update! I can't wait to see what you have planned. Post more soon!

Wow another good chapter. Please update soon I can't wait to see what you do next. Scarlet and Derek are just super sweet.

Update ASAP please?!

I loved the update! I can't wait to see what you have planned, I'm glad her and Erica are okay. Post more soon!

YAY! So happy you updated! This was really good, I'm interested to see what happens next!

Another amazing update