You said there would be an epilogue five years ago

I read the little part that said these are not men but monsters blah blah(not that it's unimportant I'm just to lazy to type it all out) and I felt the INSPIRATION..that sounded so much better in my head XD

PLEASE START WRITING FANFICTION AGAIN YOU ARE A GR8 WRITER ALSO LOVE THE NATHAN FILLION JOKE LOL!

No offense ( I am amazed that you came out with this story in less than a year), but I think that an edit of this story would prove wonders for the reading experience. For example, you said that Blodhgarm is more wolf than animal, and I think you meant more wolf than human.

Lol. I really like the "one does not simply walk into a cave." That was so hilarious, I started coughing and choking.

I really like this,however a couple of questions.1. Why do they hate half-breeds, I know you said they believe that half-breeds are abominations but why? 2. I saw in one of your athuor notes that you said half-breeds are far stronger than there normal counterparts so when it comes to the varden wouldn't they see the benefit of have 500 super strong soldiers/mages in there army? If someone could write a review or something like that i'd appreciate it any love the story so far.

I just looked it up on google and dora the explorer Has been around for 10 years but that was in 2010 but since it still continue s shes been around 6 years old for 17 years

Because "Nobody tosses a dwarf." XD

i love how u can write so fast and still make it great
ur awesome bro

did u really have to kill off the dragons i cant get over that saphira is gone ,made me cry

People seem to be under the impression that getting stabbed through the heart is an instant dead. Sorry to crush your Hollywood, folks, but that is not the case.
Granted, after around fifteen seconds, you wouldn't be conscious, but it could take a few minutes or an hour. It really is circumstantial, but only something that would immediately shut off the brain would result in an instant death. (Or a backstab, if you play TF2.)
The human body is a lot more resilient than we give it credit for. Abraham Lincon received a bullet through the back of his head, and without modern medicine, lasted the night, at home, in his bed. Granted, he wasn't conscious, but he still lasted the night. So yeah. Getting stabbed through the heart? Slow and painful. At least you wouldn't be conscious for most of it.

Again, you wrote Eragon as having sight... He's blind...

Orcs don't reproduce... They're dead Elves... Remember? They are actually mined from the earth in LOTR.

You didn't tell us why. Also, "one last look at the beautiful elf within his arms"? Insert Toff quote here.

I suppose it's bred into me. Maybe I just like being profound, carrying that hidden meaning through text. But I like to think it's because it feels just like reading to me.