NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I spent two whole days away from life reading this! I don't care what others have said (I didn't read any of the other comments either. No one has the right to discourage a blossoming writer.) I myself am a writer and a reader too. Literature was always my best subject. You are a good writer with a great story! Don't let a little writer's block get you down.
Whelp. With how good this fic is, I am gonna see if ya got any others on your page. If they are half as good as this then they are worth reading, even if they are incomplete...

Darn it why did you make me loose the game!?

I:: crying so hard right now

Do you know how creepy it is to look for RotG stories...and see your name there in a story...scared me

I read this untill chapter 38, now i did skim over the last chapter, and i almost wish i didnt read. However, that is because i am not a fan of sequels. Now, i stoped reading because i felt as if the plot was becoming repetitive and predictable. Constructive criticism is a good thing, im not trying to be rude, also tge characters weren't exactly developing anymore, abd considering the timeframe its unbelievable, and it was hard to pictures the ocs. But let me end on a good note, the begining was very alluring, chic maybe even a bit realistic. The adaption of Daniel was perfect, a big brother figure and so was the realtionship between angel and demon, unlikely paramours that understood the other. The implementation had a good run

OH MEH GOSH! IM DYING! THIS IS AWESOME! NOW I'M JUST WONDERING... DID SKYLA DIE AND IS ABOUT TO BECOME A SPIRIT AND BE WITH JACK FOREVER?! OH MEH GOSH! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!

aww that was really cute!
I spent three days reading this whole thing by the way. honestly, this is one of the better Jack Frost love stories I've read. I think it's a lot better than most. There's a plot and a conflict. Sure, it gets mushy, but there's conflict and arguing and problems, unlike most love stories for Jack. And of course it's gonna be mushy, but it's not like you're the only one who's done it. I don't think it's ridiculous or far-fetched or deserves to be criticized, because there's stuff a lot worse than this that gets amazing reviews. I think character development was great compared to most, cuz it wasn't immediate and she still had to overcome Brandon and stuff. And that whole being Pitch's daughter put a really cool plot twist on it, I thought. When she admitted her full name, I was all like "woah".
I actually really liked this. Sorry if the review made no sense but it's probably the longest one I've written and I'm tired and I kinda cried a little so uh yeah but I just wanted to say good job :) I really enjoyed it.

YAY I'M SO GLAD THERE'S A SEQUEL! Thank you for sharing this story with the world; even though it was slightly over-dramatic and a little mushy at times, I have truly enjoyed reading this. Can't wait to read the next part of the story! 3

I am in luv with this story so so much

Don't you dare ended it like that!? We need a sequel now! You're story is amazing! Please please! Continue it!

NO! NO! NO, NO, NO!
(Throws tantrum like a toddler)

Sequel! Now! This microsecond!

I need to know what happened to Skyla!

...o.o

No.

You cannot just leave it like that!

Nononono. Now you go make that sequel or else I will have a mental break down!

SEQUEL!

SEQUEL! XD

IF anyone wants it?! If anyone wants ?! OF COURSE WE WANT IT! You can't just end a story like THAT ! SEQUEL sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel