Reviews for she pales the light of day
revilo chapter 7 . 7/22
AHHHHHH I LOVED THIS THANK YOU!
Revolos55 chapter 7 . 5/23/2015
I love your Christina
MONEBUDDHA chapter 7 . 4/28/2014
Absolutely adorable! Loved every chapter.
feyi33 chapter 7 . 8/17/2013
Love the feel of this story. Thanks so much
Kristen chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
Amazing, wonderful, so well done.
yui1808 chapter 7 . 8/2/2013
Hello,

So here's my final review for this story...

First of all, please know that, I enjoyed the story so much, even though I had to succumb to sleep before reading the last chapter - a shame, really. I also loved your characterization, their interactions with each other, and also how mature they were, sans Christina's mentality. I was a bit concern about it; I know, silly me. She was almost three in the story, but yet, she was super mature; it's a bit out of character for a little kid, but that might just be me - I had never really interacted with a two or three year old kid - I might be (a bit) out of depth in this matter.

Anyway, I don't know if the characters were spot on as I only watched one episode, where H.G first appeared, but that didn't hinder me from loving your story. You were truthfully good in portraying your characters, even if I never knew who H.G, Myka, and the secondary characters were, I would still love and enjoy your story. There were no dull moments in your story. Oh, another thing I noticed - I couldn't really remember when, where, and how they established being officially together (which I mentioned previously) and that was one flaw in this story, but again, that might just be me, being bothered with petty details.

Also, I've been meaning to state this in the previous chapters, but I just didn't get into it - the use of present tense all throughout the story. For the third time, me being a brat, again. There were some stories that I might be really bothered, but yours, it was only minimal. It's a lot easier to read stories in the past tense form, than in the present. Though, it still depends on how the author delivers their story. But nevertheless, your story is one of the best out there in the general fanfiction world. You didn't have to use colorful words; tell every tiny detail your characters were thinking, feeling, and doing; state their day to day events, and most of all, you didn't need to make this story into a hundred thousand words (which I would prefer and be ecstatic about it) to let us or me know how you wanted your story to play out. It was really superb!

Thank you very much for sharing this story and your amazing talent; I greatly appreciate it.

I'm looking forward to read more from you.

Cheers!
yui1808 chapter 6 . 8/2/2013
I wish I could type a proper review, but I think I need to hibernate for now.

Pete's really a nice guy, even if he's a dork. Must be nice to have a best guy like him even when he was a man-child.
yui1808 chapter 5 . 8/2/2013
The kid was intelligent for a three year old; good genes, perhaps?

I couldn't remember the part where they established their relationship, though. 0:)
yui1808 chapter 4 . 8/2/2013
Points for you for having them back together, but wait, they're not yet together officially, right? Shame...

Can I say, "I think I wanna marry your story?" It's almost half past one in the morning, but I couldn't put this down; I was too much invested now.
yui1808 chapter 3 . 8/2/2013
Yehey! It's not all butterflies and unicorns. I was so relieved to know it wasn't all fluff, and there is a real story somewhere.

Maybe Claudia only worked on H.G.'s project so she and Myka could go on a date.
yui1808 chapter 2 . 8/2/2013
Dude, the kissing in the bathroom after barfing her brains off without even rinsing her mouth - not cool. I was hoping Myka would rinse first then kiss H.G. I was also saying, "Ew" in my head. But, what the hey, H.G must be really in love with Myka, or she was also drunk, or she just didn't care. Also, Myka might have been mortified afterwards.

I'm looking forward to their date. :-)
yui1808 chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Wow. I think I just saw the events unfold in front of me while reading this. I will love your writing style if this keeps going on. The first chapter was easy to read and follow; I didn't even zone out while reading it - you had my undivided attention. Kudos to you, then.
Kay chapter 7 . 5/25/2013
ADORABLE
CM chapter 7 . 5/23/2013
Perfecto
Rachel452 chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Just so you know, I've read this fic at least a dozen times, it's in my top 5 B&W fics for sure and I love it love it, will read it so many more times I can't even tell you!
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