I think you really captured the essence of this whole aspect of Jedda's character. The parts about the doll and the Phantom's concerns over boys were both nice. I liked how you described her as "this athletic teenager who moves and talks like a little girl." And I liked how she showed signs of maturity at the very end.

I really enjoyed your fic. Reading something from the Phantom's perspective is awsome, and it's nice to get some details on Jedda's life in the jungle. Both Jedda and the Phantom are awsome characters and you wrote them very well and in-character. Will there be more about them or the other Defenders?