| Reviews for A Mess of Magic |
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   tonemara chapter 1 . 2/5/2019 Love this. Still waiting for that next chapter? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2018 The story is not complete. Too bad, because it set out as an entrancing tale. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2016 Very cute... needs an ending though. :3 |
| Trinabear chapter 1 . 8/5/2015 Please add some more! So romantic and delicious! I want a handsome Goblin King too! |
| elgreer chapter 1 . 7/26/2015 I thought the dialogue was really well written! It does feel a little unresolved so I hope there's another chapter or two. |
| snapify52 chapter 1 . 4/2/2015 Lovely! |
| StarViking chapter 1 . 5/9/2014 I like Jareth's "Oh, can't we just have a moment?" I could hear David Bowie's voice saying that with a pinch of whining! |
| Lady Quotes chapter 1 . 3/8/2014 Have you ever read a book, turned to the next chapter and then realized that was the end. That's what just happened. There was no clear end. You should definitely add a chapter or two and actually finish it. |
| Mikado X Goddess chapter 1 . 4/10/2013 loved reading theis |
| Kypriothe chapter 1 . 3/29/2013 I LOVE it! Do keep going! |
| Lynnestra44 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013 This was delicious. Please add if you can! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2013 This was really good! I hope to read more. |
| Warrior orb5 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013 Urg this is so cute! |
| notwritten chapter 1 . 1/3/2013 Very likeable. It needs more please. Keep smiling. :-) |
| Princess Mariana chapter 1 . 1/3/2013 This is great! Please update! |
