Reviews for Coming Undone
itsprettyboy chapter 21 . 5/7
Imma stop reading because she very easily got used to the idea that Daryl was her father and kinda forgot Merle. It was a somewhat good read but eh.
BlueJae3 chapter 13 . 5/14/2019
Libbys reaction seems a little off, no matter how mature, smart and understanding she is, Libby has just been told that her farther was abandoned while chained to a roof without any protection from the sun and dehydration, and only a chained door between him and any walkers. While I think she would be more upset if they had abandoned Daryl instead of Merle (Daryl being more of a farther to her then Merle has been), Merle is still her Dad. I would have thought she would be in shock, then deny it, blame Grimes & Co then isolate herself away from them. Instead Libby comes across as indifferent, as if they were discussing the weather. Im sorry, I truly am enjoying your story, but Libby in chapter 13 comes off a bit flat.
hossfan chapter 31 . 2/19/2018
I understand why Skyla can't be in the story. That's OK, but I miss her.
Did you post Falling Away? I don't see it. Thanks.
hossfan chapter 7 . 2/18/2018
Yes, I'm annoyed that you offed Skyla, but not annoyed enough to stop reading. (Besides, I've been known to fanfic fanfics, so ... who knows? LOL.
skye-speedy chapter 16 . 9/24/2017
Looking good.
SunflowersandRainyDays chapter 31 . 3/19/2017
Daryl and Libby's relationship is absolutely adorable.
tat5934 chapter 31 . 3/3/2017
Too bad there is no sequel for this fic I would have loved it!
Anyway this story was interesting and I had a good time reading it
tat5934 chapter 29 . 3/3/2017
Of course she isn't getting any ideas :P
tat5934 chapter 28 . 3/3/2017
I don't know whose side to choose because they both have pretty good arguments
tat5934 chapter 27 . 3/3/2017
Why ?! :'(
tat5934 chapter 26 . 3/3/2017
Ha ha ! Hilarious!
tat5934 chapter 23 . 3/3/2017
Ha ha ! Boys and period talks XD
tat5934 chapter 22 . 3/3/2017
Oh no ! We missed the best parts! The one where Daryl tore the place apart :-)
tat5934 chapter 21 . 3/3/2017
Daryl is going to be pissed off!
tat5934 chapter 20 . 3/3/2017
So sad about Sophia but the last scene was really cute
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