Reviews for Coming Undone |
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itsprettyboy chapter 21 . 5/7 Imma stop reading because she very easily got used to the idea that Daryl was her father and kinda forgot Merle. It was a somewhat good read but eh. |
BlueJae3 chapter 13 . 5/14/2019 Libbys reaction seems a little off, no matter how mature, smart and understanding she is, Libby has just been told that her farther was abandoned while chained to a roof without any protection from the sun and dehydration, and only a chained door between him and any walkers. While I think she would be more upset if they had abandoned Daryl instead of Merle (Daryl being more of a farther to her then Merle has been), Merle is still her Dad. I would have thought she would be in shock, then deny it, blame Grimes & Co then isolate herself away from them. Instead Libby comes across as indifferent, as if they were discussing the weather. Im sorry, I truly am enjoying your story, but Libby in chapter 13 comes off a bit flat. |
hossfan chapter 31 . 2/19/2018 I understand why Skyla can't be in the story. That's OK, but I miss her. Did you post Falling Away? I don't see it. Thanks. |
hossfan chapter 7 . 2/18/2018 Yes, I'm annoyed that you offed Skyla, but not annoyed enough to stop reading. (Besides, I've been known to fanfic fanfics, so ... who knows? LOL. |
skye-speedy chapter 16 . 9/24/2017 Looking good. |
SunflowersandRainyDays chapter 31 . 3/19/2017 Daryl and Libby's relationship is absolutely adorable. |
tat5934 chapter 31 . 3/3/2017 Too bad there is no sequel for this fic I would have loved it! Anyway this story was interesting and I had a good time reading it |
tat5934 chapter 29 . 3/3/2017 Of course she isn't getting any ideas :P |
tat5934 chapter 28 . 3/3/2017 I don't know whose side to choose because they both have pretty good arguments |
tat5934 chapter 27 . 3/3/2017 Why ?! :'( |
tat5934 chapter 26 . 3/3/2017 Ha ha ! Hilarious! |
tat5934 chapter 23 . 3/3/2017 Ha ha ! Boys and period talks XD |
tat5934 chapter 22 . 3/3/2017 Oh no ! We missed the best parts! The one where Daryl tore the place apart :-) |
tat5934 chapter 21 . 3/3/2017 Daryl is going to be pissed off! |
tat5934 chapter 20 . 3/3/2017 So sad about Sophia but the last scene was really cute |