Great story I can't wait for the update!

I absolutely loved this new chapter! Does this mean Thorn is definitely quitting quidditch? Also I can’t wait to see how her a Leila fit into the plot of sorcerers stone! It’s going to be so exciting I can tell!

Hi it's me!
Uh Fred and George that's not how you treat a lady
Aw well that is nice of them
Omg I could totes now see drake and mr weasley gushing over muggle thingamabobs
Oooooh I think George will mind Leila
Awww Leila's got a date
Awww poor George

This chp was too cute I can't wait for more!

I know it been a while since you updated this story? But have you thought of adding some new chapters?

SheepAreFluffy97

I don't know if you've given up on this but I'm hoping not because I really like it. Please update soon.

I really like your writing style- look forward to the next few chapters! thank you for sharing :)

Hello it's me!
Aw I like the rain
I dont think I'd b able to handle the stuttering either
I love how they all know each other so well
Oh yay I hope the gang can hang that summer they'll have fun
Ugh snape how rude
Awwwww yay baby Oliver wood *(i wanna pinch his cheeks* )
Teehee Angelina is so knowing
Hmmmm why did they leave so suddenly?
Dude you r jealous come on just tell your bro
Finally!
HCA also wrote the little mermaid woot woot
I'm excited to c what they do over the summer

And they're gonna meet Harry and hermione soon yay

Jackie and thorn r such good buds
Good idea Leila's dad
Hmmm I think thorns dads job might play a big part sometime soon
Is thorn gonna meet myrtle in the loo
Poor Leila
Omg dude go away
Drakes kinda like gaston
No ones the most obnoxious like drake

Ooooooo burn
Someones about to get an asswhoopin poor Leila she's probably like what?
Look at you thorn being a bamf
Poor georgie

Yay I'm caught up now!

What end of term already?
Oh wait never mind it's XMAS YAY!
Ugh Connors :P
Ahhhh yay they'll celebrate Xmas eve together!
Hahah what If Leila had an electric fireplace
Now she's talkin like Spock Fascinating
Awww shes leaning his head on his shoulder
WON WON
Nice dress choice Leila
Oooo Arnold's here this should be fun (who do u picture Arnold as anyways?)
Whoa slow down buddy
Whoa wait what?what?
Oooo tension
Lol he thinks the twins r handsome
Lol oh twins
Excuse me? Muggle
I'm evil?
:O what a little twerp Fred George kick his ass
Awww please do it for her George
Hahaha
FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT
:O
Mistletoe darn knargals
Ahhhh they kissed!
Ooooooooooooohhhhh
Oh no her leg worst Xmas eve for her probably ever!

Ew that's creepy dude I'd lose my shit if some random dude said that to me in the library
Ugh someone woke on the side of the douche bed
Hey you might learn a couple things about gilly weed in there leila
Run Leila run this dudes creepy use a book as a weapon
Yeah just call her Leila DRAKE
Someone's confident aren't they?
Is this a big deal Jackie?
I'd put Cedric at the top sweetie
Hey look at the twins being in fourth I think they'd take great pride in that
Ooooo awkward
That's right Cedric me boy (high five)
Jackie your being supes obvi
Oh so he hasn't tried out yet oooo im sorry Ced about the comment I made in my last review please forgive me

Man word travels fast at hogwarts
That's right George!
Stalker then again they do live in the same building so not much places to hide from
Someone
Lol this is gonna be good
Wow George!
Shipping them now too
(imitates drake) yeah I gotta go look at myself in my mirror and remind myself that I'm pretty
No you guys didn't screw up well in my eye you didn't

Ugh that sounds miserable
Oh are you gonna mention a young Oliver wood like following Charlie around like a puppy? That'd be so cute
Woooo go thorn
Yay thorn made it!
Try out for seeker Cedric(cough cough)
Lol Leila on a broom
Go Percy getting even with his bros
Anyone wonder if owl droppings ever land in the students food during mail time? Bleh
Awwww kitty sorry I think I say Awww to often in my reviews
Shipping it already
Arnold?
Awwwww why you making things so conflicted now Arnold don't be a Ducky
Yeah how come our photos don't move we can do it online so why not real pics
How can you guys forget?
Wait so Cedric's not a seeker in his first year then? Hmmm that would explain why he wasn't that good in prisoner of azkaban
Soo who won? Ahhh
Oh well great chp

Mountains? Ugh evil teachers but I know the feeling
Great now I'm hungry hmmm I can see why I'm
Half jiggly puff I mean hufflepuf now
Luck they're on the weekend and I have school tomorrow
Ugh Jackie such a show off
Haha lol good one Alicia
Awwww that's very nice of you Fred
Oooooo I love how you mention the paintings interacting with her that really adds to the magic of the story
Ooooo what's in the room?
Oh wait I know what it is!
Wow never thought about the stairs making you late to class
Awwww Leila wants to be a healer I can c that
FORESHADOWING!
I bet thorns gonna be an auror or quidditch player when she's older and give it all up to be a mommy
Whoa George is actually caring bout the rules now?

I like Leila's personality! It's different, and that makes the story more interesting.

I love how you're sharing the focus of the story between the two girls, and spending less time on Fred and George. I don't think they would become best friends at first (I mean I don't think she would notice everything about them yet). The hufflepuff common room sound do cool, Im so glad not all the characters are in Gryffindor. On to the next chapter! Gabi

This is an interesting start. Ill be interested to see what happens to the children.