Awesome, gripping story. Please update this soon.
I really want to see Ralph and vanellope get together.

I've got to say, I really liked this story. The OCs are interesting and engaging and fit in well with the other characters, you did the characterization pretty well, and your plot is quite good. Honestly, I'm very excited to see what will happen with this story in Phase 2. Please, keep it up if you can, you're a good author, and I would love to see more of you.

Please continue, just started reading and this is interesting.

How about Pop-Roxanne?

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Lattencia McBeans. LOL I know that name sucks, oh well xD. Great chapter! Glad to see you update again cause I love this story! Looking forward to the next chapter!

I'm supposed to give a review, but that's pointless since everything I say will be nothing but praise.

The plot, while unoriginal (but then, what kind of story has an original plot these days?), is genius. The storytelling is good, not too complicated but still enough to get your imagination going. Setting is good, characterization is spot-on, spelling and grammar is excellent.

As for the names, I have a few. One is Klim Holstein, for a bit of genius bonus. Klim is just milk spelled backwards while Holstein is a breed of dairy cattle. Another is Forsison Juicebox, because it looks and sounds wacky. Others are simple ones like Kopi Nescaf (Nescafe Coffee) and Civetina Catsbottom (Civet coffee comes from the feces of a civet cat).

great chapter. hopefully with the revamping of sugar rush, muffin man will be back!

btw, thank you for taking time to answer reviewers, especially my silly ramblings :D

AHHH RALPH SAW VANELLOPE! But then...noooooooooooooooo! DX

lmao, Felix is stuck on this having kids business, isn't he? XD

and whoa...so is King Candy gonna come back since his code is still around, or will the programmers scrap his code completely so he can NEVER come back. hmmmm...

My Sugar Rush name suggestion: Sodalina Fizzlepop

Yeah, you're bringing back the Muffin Man! That alone makes up for the heartbreak you put Ralph through!

As for the names, I technically have two. Pipsi Cola is the name of one of my Sugar Rush OCs, but her original name was Fizzy McCola. You're welcome to use either name if you want, but don't be suprised if Pipsi shows up in one of my future stories. ;)

Omigosh the game's being upgraded! I wonder how Ralph and Vanellope's relationship will handle the memory wipe if it's permanent. And I like how you explained Minty Sakura's existence; she and Candlehead are very similar.

I have a small question: if all the candy citizens bailed from their game, does their code still exist in Sugar Rush? Will they be replaced in the upgrade, essentially created a clone machine that has many psychological and existential ramifications? Ooh, that would explain why arcade owners who get second-hand games are able to play them even if the characters escaped...brb I made a plot bunny.

As for "Caffeine Craze" names...well, it certainly depends on the gender, background and amount of product placement. A Starbucks orientated girl, for example, could be Lattie Mochaswirl (mocha latte), or Mochana Hazelcreme (mocha and hazelnut frappuchino).

Or the names could be by the type of the actual coffee, like Sumantha Caffecino (sumatra coffee cappuchino), Mandhello"Black Eye" Mundo (Black Eye Mandheling Mundo Novo), Dolcita Sugarbrew (dolce latte), Espessina Doubleshot (espressino cafe americano), etc.

"Caffeine" even extends to sodas and chocolates and teas and energy drinks, making for Petrapop Bottlerush (soda, probably cola), Velvetina[/o for boy] Cocodust (red/black velvet cake cocoa powder), Cham[-my for girl] Tazoleaf (chamomile Tazo tea) , Bobalin Bubbletea (boba milk tea), Roxandra "Roxie the Monster" Stardrink (Rockstar Monster energy drinks)...it goes on and on.

Just take cute sounding words or word pieces from caffeinated drinks :D

No. Vanellope-Vanellope didn't lose her memory-NO! HE WAS RIGHT THERE! RIGHT THWISISNAXKALAB
Keep writing and God bless!
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This is a good story. Please continue. Ralph and Vanellope forever.

Another amazing chapter! Keep up the great work!

excellent work! i did wonder why felix didn't just fix the plane... i don't remember the details of that section, but candlehead's spoon was made out of code that had leaked everywhere (right?) and muffin man's code was also leaking so it's possible that some of his code really is in the spoon! :D probably not enough to regenerate him, but there nonetheless

i hope you are doing well, btw!