Damn it...please updaaate! I was like totally cut off...Love this! Please update and waiting for more Akashi-san and Aomine!~ I really hope you'll update!

I thought tora would end up with akashi,
Huff, wasted my hours by reading this

I really like this story and I hope you haven't discontinued it. Your writing is superb, and you keep all the characters in character through out the story, something that is truly amazing. I hope you finish this story, or at least update it. I know a lot of people are looking forward to it!

lol why is it getting worse lolol
'shes not a maniac that stabs people with scissors'
'at least it wasnt aominekun'

ahahahahaha poor risecchi your daughter is going to date all the guys you hate and midorima is forever nooo i cant stop laughing

THIS IS REALLY CUTE
so cute im disappointed by the akashioc pairing
kiseoc is so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

You should really take another look at the first chapters - you constantly mix up present and past when it comes to your verbs. For example, the last sentence of the second paragraph, it should be 'left' instead of 'leaves'. 'Leaves' is the present of the verb 'to leave', and the whole story is mostly written in simple past, so it should be, by extension, 'left'.

That's just an example, so you know what to look for. But try and re-read your chapters to edit them, or maybe ask for a beta. It would help your story.

We need more Akashi TTTT

I really like this, especially how you actually have her dating more than one - not at the same time, obviously, but how she isn't immediately happy with her first crush. If she breaks up with Kise to get together with Aomine, then chooses Akashi in the end... I can't wait for the development of her relationship with Akashi.

It's been awhile, but I hope you contine to ypdate this, it's really good!

ITS SO GOOOOOD! I CAN'T WAIT FOR AKASHI X TORA! PLEASEEEE

Oya? Did I just sense that Akashi got slightly interested to Tora when they saw her in her date? Now I'm kinda excited what will happen when Kaijo takes on Toou.

Okay to be honest, I'm not a fan of OC but your OC is different from the OC of the others fic because Tora isn't prideful/obnoxious unlike the other fics that I encounter where the OC is TOO perfect... I like Tora, she is polite at times and knows her mistakes, I specially like how she tries to understand the people around her.

I also like the way you type/write...

Overall, your fic is awesome! I like Tora, I like the plot, I love everything about it! Please! Please update soon!

She's HAS to be with Kise or Akashi. BUT better with Kise, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease

Theres not much to say, except that im COMPLETELY IN LOVE with this story! Keep going!

And now I feel sorry for Aomine. Tora has just resolved everything with Aomine and then Akashi will eventually join in the fray... Poor Tora's life will be so complicated in the next few chapters

GOD, I fell in love with this story. But i want ToraxKise, even if I like Akashi more. Aomine should be her best friend! Kise is perfect for Tora I can't wait for next chapter :")