Besides telling Stiles that he reminds him of his mother it was a very cute story.

Always trust this little voice Derek ;-)

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cool story :-)

That was super duper cute. Keep on writing.

I liked reading Derek's point of view. The story was well written and really reflective. I can tell that you really thought out your ideas and fleshed them out. The confession at the end was tasteful and well put. I liked when Derek laughed; it is such a rare occurrence, that reading and imagining it was so delightful and delicious. It was a good thing to include. Good job.

Omg need more love it (:

I REALLYREALLYREALLYREALLYREAL LY liked this! But you may want to boost the rating to T cause of the swearing and all. People may be more happy with that. Just a suggestion.

More please