Reviews for Art is Fleeting, My Little Bomber, Un
brambleus chapter 31 . 3/19
Her elements have to be earth and lightning(not wind whoops) since she has the explosion release kekkei genkai. There is no other she could have, simple as that. Not too difficult. To add to this, she could learn chidori along with Sasuke with lightning release because her eyepiece should be able to compensate for the tunnel vision.
brambleus chapter 31 . 3/19
Emiko is kinda an underwhelming character. I get that she is still 12 but she knows minimal jutsu(being only 2 earth and no wind) and is useless without her clay which she isn't even that skilled at compared to Deidera.
brambleus chapter 27 . 3/19
These last two chapters kinda sucked. Pointless conflicts, Emiko having no purpose, everything is forced. I hope everything picks up later.

I really dont give a shit about these Iwa ninja.
brambleus chapter 26 . 3/19
These little fights make no sense. Like they have no purpose. Like the way Emiko goes around and starts fights and stuff and there are no reactions or consequences? WTF was that little 3 on one toss around? Everyone just gonna chill while she is being assaulted, SO FUCKING STUPID. Just get rid of them and continue with the plot.
brambleus chapter 25 . 3/19
Shouldnt they have already know Kakashi was Guy's rival since Emiko told them when they first formed teams? Plot hole.

I hope Sakura and Emiko make up in the forest of death when things go haywire.
brambleus chapter 23 . 3/19
I would think Deidera would want to keep her away from the Akatsuki. If she does go rogue it would be after being betrayed by Sasuke or marked by Orochimaru( I assume Orochimaru would find her body expiremet worthy)
brambleus chapter 17 . 3/19
Emiko will be forced to be average as long as allies are nearby since her explosives are too powerful. It sucks that she is nerfed temporarily, I just hope you make her have a big boost when she can go all out.
brambleus chapter 15 . 3/19
Hormonal teenagers. That's the summary of this chapter.
brambleus chapter 14 . 3/19
I didn't really like how you did this chapter. It just doesn't work. Emiko has chakra control equal to Sakura or even better it's just she used it differently. The chakra control to mold something is like as hard as element manipulation, and that took Naruto 1000 clones and a week to master. You could have made Kakashi mention it out loud instead of some stupid conflict and bragging.

Also, this entire exercise should be pointless to Emiko. She was raised by Deidera and should have already been taught this exercise. It's super forced.
brambleus chapter 5 . 3/19
Things are just getting explosive, un!
brambleus chapter 3 . 3/19
I guess Emiko is gonna be absolutely beautiful like a girl version of Deidera. It's also important to realize that while this letter is from deidera, she is getting acess to sensitive information on the Akatsuki.
brambleus chapter 1 . 3/19
The verbal tic is adorable.
Dav009 chapter 46 . 2/13
Hey this is a really great story. It shouldn’t be put on the shelf and forgotten. I look forward to seeing more chapters hopefully soon.
SlytherinLoverGirl1200 chapter 46 . 9/6/2019
Update soon please add chapter 47 I love this book
Guest chapter 46 . 10/10/2018
Omg Author!
This is so good! I am legit addicted.
10/10! •
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