Holy shit this was amazing. I couldn't drop this story at all! Even though it followed familiar quests, there were twists added to keep them unique, and DAMN THOSE raunchy scenes were hot as hell.

Thanks for sharing your story- It gave me a perspective I never considered and thoroughly enjoyed it!

This was an amazing story. I absolutely loved how layered your Dragonborn was. She has to be the most interesting one I have read yet. I loved how bloodthirsty she was and how she made the perfect anti-hero. She was the last person you would expect to save the world for any reason. It was wonderful watching Lumen stronger throughout the story. On top of that you brought in so many wonderfully dark characters (Luka is definitely a favorite), and added them to the Brotherhood. Keeping Arnbjorn was a nice touch as well. I'm always saddened by the loss of him, Gabriella, and Veezara. You did a great job building upon the characters and kept them all interesting. I for one hope you continue writing for this world and fandom.

Such a great story! I loved it. I'm a bit disappointed that we didn't get one last smutty scene though lol.

This. Was. AMAZING!

I absolutely adored it!

Thank you.

Poetic.

Good things happened. They don’t always have to involve smut. Geez, peeps. Get a grip. Hahaha.

Oh no. They are going to get themselves killed. We, Cicero and Luka are. Ha. But, it’s not funny.

*sigh*

I’ll have you know that I will never again be able to look at Ulfric’s throne without picturing Cicero trying to sit on it. I mean, who wouldn’t want to? My Elf sat on it just the other day. Hahaha. And I’ve actually put a totally stripped and dead Ulfric on it and there was a glitch so now people sit in him. Hahaha. Way too much fun.

Also, I was expecting Cicero to say something about the Butcher and his “interesting knife work”. Seriously, the “stab, stab, stab, stab”s are my absolute favorite thing he says. Hahahaha.

Who doesn’t love a big tough marshmallow?

I SO don’t trust authors and screenwriters. Ha. I would have cut his head off to make certain he was dead and couldn’t be brought back OR burned the ship to the ocean. Or maybe both. Ha.

Often times when we get the desire of our hearts, we find we don’t feel the way we thought we would. I am glad she doesn’t have to worry about him anymore, tho Elenwen is still alive.

Go Arnbjorn!

You keep referring to Cicero as little. How tall is your Cicero ? I giggled at the 28” inseam. I’m 5’6” and wear a longer inseam, tho I have longer legs, so I was wondering. Ha. And his boots?! Hahaha. My hubby wears tall Doc Martens for that reason. Hahaha. I can totally imagine Arnbjorn’s disgusted face. Made me laugh. And the eyebrow plucking made me think of a video a Scottish (?) father made of his daughter after she got her eyebrows done and was asking him about them. Hahahaha. Ah, the joys of plucking.

On to the serious, holy crap! Elenwen! WTH?!

Alright, your characters are fabulous. I love Lumen for her realness. You let us see her emotions and her imperfections so clearly and we can all relate. It’s really awesome. I really enjoy this story because of your thoroughness. Thank you.

I’m only not worrying because there is still story left to read and Cicero can’t be killed. And those are NOT tears in my eyes.

I HATE Blackreach. Hate it! Especially that first time you play as a weak newby and everything makes you jump. Doesn’t help that I’m claustrophobic and the idea of being underground makes my stomach knot.

I think I felt the most for Arnbjorn in this chapter. Ha. Poor wolf. He was like the fed-up dad of a group of idiot teenagers. I imagine he has a mental divot on his forehead from all the mental facepalms he’d done. Ha. At least he got a little somethin’ somethin’ for his efforts.

Luka is too much. Hahaha. So adorable and freakishly innocent but not. Ha.

Luka is ADORABLE! I can’t wait to learn his backstory.