Very, VERY good.

Impressive, rhyme AND meaning shines through! Where was this challenge that you took up so well posted- if I may ask?

My favorite part of your epic poem is when you re-tell the meeting beytween Emma and Hook.
Thanks for the read. Abi

Wow, that was lovely. Honestly. :)

Beautiful! A wonderful expression of who Hook really is.

I can only guess that the Labyrinth reference in this poem was: "Of wonders unnumbered, And fortunes untold." I could be wrong, but that's what I thought it was. I honestly really liked this; I was completely captivated by it. I'm usually not a fan of poetry, but I found myself enjoying this. Well done and lovely work, Dearie!

This is good.

Awesome, probably, the first poem fic I've enjoyed. My favorite lines, "But he allowed himself felled,/For the love of a Swan" just because I agree that he threw that fight, or at least he wasn't willing to win at the cost of her life. Any way, nice job!

THIS IS AMAZING. I love it soooooooooo much!

That was the best poem ever! Oh my gosh I was smiling when I read this. It was so perfect! Thank you for writing this poem even if it was for a contest. As far as I'm concerned you win! Totally a favorite!

This was stunningly beautiful. The flow was amazing, and the story was perfect. I hope you win you deserve it!

Ok...typically I hate poetry :) But this was good! :) I have no idea of the type of poem it was suppose to be, but I did love yours! :)

How beautiful, I love it

While I love to read poems and love to write poetry, I must confess that I don't read poems based on couples that I ship. I have tried to read such poems in the past, especially on this site, but most of them were horribly written. I was hesitant to read yours at first. But in all honesty, I'm really glad that I ultimately gave it a shot.

Well, wow. I'm at a loss for words. This was just absolutely brilliant and completely flawless. Also, it was very well-written. I loved the way you made all of the words flow together from one stanza to the next. Loved the way you told the poem from Killian's perspective as well. It made me feel for him more than I already do. And at certain times I thought I was gonna cry, but I didn't.

All in all, this was one of the best poems I've read in a very, very long time. Thank you for writing and sharing it with everyone. Hope you write more Captain Swan poems and/or fics in the future. I for one would definitely read them. *smiles*