Just a heads up that the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken so far, despite the good writing quality that this story has beforehand:

"The chapter system is not to be used as placeholder for non-story content such as author notes. You can add short author notes to the beginning or at the end of stories but never as individual chapters."

Add some story content within this chapter or merge it as an author's note within a chapter of your most recently updated story that has story content.

that episode when Misty's Gyrados used Flame Thrower was in the episodeThe Togepi Mirage
or The Princess And The Togepi

I'm just saying that technically swift cant be dodged, both in the ANIME and the Games clearly state that.

Update please

I have waited so long to read this and i finally have found this thank you travis

I loved this story! It is easily in my top 3 pokeshipping stories and top 5 pokemon based fanfiction! I just love the about of emotion you put into the story... When Ash was shot, the first thing I thought was, "awe hell no, this author better not kill off Ash!" Then in the hospital when it looked like he was going to die I was getting pretty irritated. But in the end everything turned out great! You should be very proud that your writing was able to invoke such a powerful emotional response from your readers, trust me when I say that I am not the only one that read this and loved it for the very same reasons! Thankyou for a wonderful story!

Your story was just great the writing and character development was the best part of this story your a great writer I look forward to more of your writing

So I saw "Mistakes: A Twist In Fate" and I'm all like, use talkin bout man book or yo book? Except I don't speak like that XD I loved the storie. I read it all tonight, and it is now 1:09 and I have a really big test tomorrow XD

Ghfux really is my account, I just don't log in on mobile because it logs me right off

One of my favorite stories on the net

Man! That sucks! Do you know why you're up for review?

I love how you made May die.

That sounded really mean, now I feel bad. But I like how you have problems that actually occur, like the death of May.

I have to say, you tried to make me cry, but like many others, failed... Epically

My mouth was stuck like this :(. I could not get a strait face on. Imma like, stop frowning, May I'd dead, that's a good thing... Sorta. It was sad, you just failed to make me cry.

A really great story.

I LOVED IT!

This is honestly one of the best stories I've read. I'm not ashamed that I had to choke back a few tears whilst reading this... Good job man, good job...

this was one of the best stories ive ever read!
loved it!:)
it was also sad and at some of the parts i wanted to cry;-;
id definatly recommand this to anyone!
10/10!;)