Reviews for At The End Of All Things
darkshadowcryptic chapter 23 . 6/28
really hope this story gets finished! i read all 23 chapters in one day. i love time travel/do it again fics, and yours is one of the best. please update and finish your story!
Guest chapter 23 . 5/8
At first I was like this makes no sense. Harry would never risk losing hermione by taking wives before getting her approval first. But you made it seem kind of okay by saying if hermione didn’t want them to be his wives magic wouldn’t have let them bond to Harry. I think Luna bonding makes sense. But the others had hermione feeling jealous so I think she wasn’t 100% okay with them bonding to Harry before she woke up from being petrified. I’m super glad Ginny is not going to be joining. I hope Astoria, gabby, Fleur and tonks aren’t joining either. Maybe gabby but I think no still. Seriously no more sisters besides the twins. And tonks would be so wrong. She’s older and should be with Remus again. I think he has 8 girls now is that all of them I hope so. I thought there were 2 or 3 contracts for Harry so that would make 11 maybe don’t have more than 13 girls though even that seems like to much. I want to find out what dumbles has done. It sounds like he did the same as voldy. How many souls prices are there. More chapters please
GenieM chapter 23 . 3/31
I hope you finish this story. I am very much enjoying it. It is the second time I've read it!
GhostStepper chapter 23 . 2/19
Just like other readers I hope you continue writing this story. I really enjoy reading it.
EmiSchwalger chapter 23 . 1/31
I’ve enjoyed this story thus far! Great writing! Keep up the good work!
Priest chapter 23 . 1/27
This was a very interesting story and I hope you plan on continuing it someday.
Death Lantern chapter 3 . 1/10
You do know how creepy it sounds when he says "my Hermione", right?
Bronze chapter 8 . 12/2/2019
I know in the movie that Lockhart didn't rape any of the students but I've read this idea before and God help whomever if it had been my sister or niece! I'd be spending the rest of my life in prison because of it. Anywho, you've gone and done it to me again! I never expected Harry to shake Dracos' hand in friendship. Maybe tear it off and beat him to death with it but not shake it! But I'm enjoying reading the twists and turns you've written into your story so far. Everytime I think I know what's gonna happen in the next chapter I get blindsided by something else! As Mr. Food was so fond of saying 'Oooh, it's so good! " I feel that way about this story. The only trouble I have with it is, it's 2:53 AM and I don't want to stop reading! But if I don't, it'll be somewhere after dawn before I get to bed. So I'll post this and get to bed. Please keep up the good work.
Bronze chapter 7 . 12/2/2019
Well, the confrontation with MoooRon came a lot sooner then I expected. But not as violently as I thought it might. Though JKR had Harry forgive the MoooRon regardless of how many times he abandoned Hermione and himself I very glad to see this Harry Potter isn't such a fool. His worst offense was during the Horcrux Hunt. He abandoned them because the food ran out, he was cold and Harry didn't have any idea where the other Horcruxes were. They ran out of food because MoooRon refused to eat less than three or four times his share. If I'm right about this next part great. If not, my apologies as I've never read any of the books. Now Harry didn't know where the other Horcruxes were because Fumblemort never told him. Fumblemort wasted an entire year showing Harry what amounted to Home Movies about the life of Riddle instead of training Harry. As for being cold, Harry and Hermione weren't any warmer than he was but they didn't abandon the hunt. If I'm right MoooRon also complained that they didn't know how to destroy the Horcruxes once they found them anyway. And again it comes back to Fumblemorts' failure to actually train Harry for the hunt. Fumblemort had the responsibility to train Harry as he knew from before Harry was born that he, Harry, was the one destined to kill Riddle. In this and other fanfiction stories, Fumblemort bound Harry's core and placed blocks on his magic. Fortunately, those blocks and bindings were destroyed along with the soul fragment in his scar when his magic healed him.
Bronze chapter 6 . 12/2/2019
Not at all what I expected from Gringotts! I was totally expecting the letter to be about how much Fumblemort and those he allowed took from the Potter vaults. Instead, it's Guardianship paper for Luna, Lavender and then Patil twins. I never even saw that coming! That's not meant as a flame by the way. Merely a statement of truth. I do wonder why Harry hasn't contacted the DMLE or the Unspeakables about what's going on. But hopefully, you'll get around to that soon. I'm also waiting for the other shoe to drop concerning Fumblemort. He's had ten or twelve years to screw up the Potter accounts after all. Furthermore, I'm expecting something to happen to Snape the next time he tries to enter Harrys' mind. I expect that is likely to happen in Harrys' next Potions class. Regardless of whose side Snape is really on, he's working extremely hard to put himself in Azkaban for life if he survives the war. If you just think about his attitude for a second you'll realize that he, along with Fumblemort, have done more to hurt the magical world in England then Riddle did before becoming a wraith.
Bronze chapter 5 . 12/2/2019
as they say, " all good things must come to an end. " And as the Gringgots' owl just arrived it's not gonna be good news. Nothing dealing with Fumblemort the great deceiver ever is. Hell! That old man could and would turn victory into defeat if he thought it was for the greater good! I'm definitely enjoying this story. Please keep up the good work.
Bronze chapter 4 . 12/2/2019
Just how many vault keys did Fumblemort hand out?! And this new law he had passed! There's no doubt that it was aimed solely at taking the Potter moneys. The most likely excuse for it would be to help rebuild the magical world. That would be the excuse given but not the truth of the matter. The truth would be that both Fumblemort and the ministry are greedy and corrupt. But by claiming his Head of House status he's just thrown a rather large spanner into both parties plans. Now I'm hopeful that the Basajaun can recover every knut that was taken with interest and charge anyone and everyone who has any Potter property rent for as long as they've had it. And clean them out for every item destroyed or damaged. What I expect is that Fumblemort himself has helped himself to anything and everything he wants from the Potter vaults. Thus he's not gonna be a happy camper when the Basajaun come demanding all of it back. And hopefully making up any shortfall of monetary value from the old frauds vault(s). Or they could just take it out of his hide. Either way works for me. Actually, come to think of it, I'd rather they do both.
Bronze chapter 3 . 12/1/2019
Oh, the great Fumblemort won't like this at all! Not only has Harry claimed his Lordship but he's about to learn a whole lot more! One of those things he's about to learn is very likely that the Fumblemort the Great has been stealing from him since either '81 or possibly even before. I'm hoping that the Goblins have the original Will(s) of Lord and Lady Potter, Harry's parents. That would be a whole lot of trouble for him to try explaining away. It wouldn't surprise me if Fumblemort illegally sold Potter property. I've read that in other HP fanfiction stories. In one I read Fumblemort invited the entire order to take anything and everything they wanted form Harry's vaults. They left him with one knut and anything that no one wanted was burned to ash right there in the vault. As for the Goblins, well Fumblemort had Harry's key and had already named himself Harry's magical guardian. Thus they told Harry he was just shit out of luck. So to read in this that he had done something similar to Harry really wouldn't surprise me at all. In fact, I'd expect it of the Primary Dark Lord of the late twentieth to early twenty-first centuries.
Bronze chapter 2 . 12/1/2019
Oh ya, he bound Harry's core for his own safety! If you believe that I've got some land down south, a few bridges and a tower in Paris to seel you! Fumblemort did it to keep Harry from outstripping him in magical power. And let's not forget about that minor little piece of Riddles' soul he deliberately left in Harrys' scar. So all in all, take anything and everything that old fraud says with ALL the salt mines in the world along with all the salt in all the oceans and seas in the world. And let's not forget the Great Salt Lake as well as the Dead Sea.
Bronze chapter 1 . 11/30/2019
Ya, I agree with you about dear ol' moRon. And I'm really not at all surprised that he murdered his wife Hermione. I'm willing to bet the only reason he married her in the first place was that he knew Harry loved her and he wanted to have something Harry didn't. MoRon was a lazy good for nothing fool who seemed to think the world own him whatever he wanted. That he shouldn't have to work for a living. Though in all truth, I have no idea what job he could possibly get with how poorly he did in school. It also wasn't a shock to me that Hermione had such a high level of love potion in her system at the time of her death. Molly likely brewed it and told her moronic son how much to give Hermione how often. But being as he has the attention span of a rock it likely went in one ear and out the other. That and she was likely fighting it. I really can't see her marrying someone that stupid with absolutely no future job prospects. Case in point in, he's married yet still living at home with his parents. They're likely supporting him and his family after he forced Hermione to give up her job as an Unspeakable due to her being close to Harry. His jealousy knows no bounds.
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