Wow, I just finished reading this fanfiction and it was truly an emotional rollercoaster. You write about their characters so well and I love the story you've created. I'll admit, I did cry a bit reading this, especially towards the end. I didn't expect it to be so bittersweet and I am so used to stories with happier endings. But sad stories make good books (fanfictions?) and I'm so glad you shared your talent and your imagination with us!

I love this story. The plot is really fantastic, it feels a bit slow at times but that’s probably just because I read the first chapter or two of the third one before deciding I was definitely missing something and went looking for previous works. The only criticism I have, which I really hope will help you, is that you need an editor. Someone who does more than spelling and grammar checks. Making sure each sentence makes sense and that you’re using the words you intend to. A while ago you said “paints” when I’m fairly confident you meant “pants”

Awh damn, Draco's being a prick still, that makes me sad

bollix? as in bollocks?

This is the worst frickin book i have ever read

Love it! I love all of the temptation fics just a question though... Will we ever find out why they both went to the room of requirement to fight each other? I've read the other fics but can't remember it being mentioned in any of them...

I don't think this interaction would have ever occurred between Harry, Ron, and Draco after the war. I think they would have settled on an uneasy truce. I don't think that they would have much interaction with each other.

this is one of the most well written breakup scenes I have ever come across! this is great, I love it!

I'm really enjoying this story. but I think you need to read your chapters before you post because the silly mistakes are making it really annoying to read. but like I said good story.

Hey. Did you delete this book from ? I wanted to reread it there but I couldn't find it. Well, it's ok now but just wanted to know. Btw I love you and this book. I don't actually ship Scorose (I ship Dramione actually) but this is just sosososo good

That was the sweetest scene!

Very good :) one of my favorite stories

I'm going to be completely honest with you, this is my favourite scorose story out there. I'm not even kidding, this story made me laugh, think and cry so much. The rollercoaster I went through reading this is probably the most amount of emotions I've gone through within the range of 24 hours. Your writing is absolutly brilliant. A lot of spelling mistakes, I'll admit but the story flows beautifully despite them. I'm going to jump straight to the sequel now but I'm going to need to cut this short because I have 3% battery left.
Thanks you so much for giving us this.
Love x

could you please go over the story with a dictionary and check your spelling and grammar? I'm not saying I don't like the story, It's quite enthralling actually, but the spelling and grammar at times is absolutely horrific, I don't mean to be negative, but I feel like I should let you know.

God I love this...