Wow. That was amazing. You write really well, and the way you portray the characters somehow manages to imitate the originals while showing a completely different side of their personalities. The way you handled descriptions and dialogue was great, the pacing of the story was perfect, and the transitions from scene to scene were very well thought out.
I really enjoyed your thoughts on the leopard and the octopus, along with how you tied it in with the story.
However, I was wondering about that last bit where you talked about Sanji's spine. Was that referring to how Sanji insisted on sitting up during the Baratie, how his back was broken in the Drum Kingdom story, or something different?
All in all, this was a great story that I would love to read over and over. Please keep writing.

Dawwwww, well this was a pretty cute story
:)

subtle angst and fluff, this was extremely enjoyable

and that would be why we love Zeff so, could have stood as a oneshot but i'm eager to see what u came up with to continue it

Aw, I really liked that story! You did a great job with it. Sanji is a really good friend. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story with me! :)

-Yvonne

This was very well written and the idea about the medicine being evidence that All Blue exists was amazing!

thumbs UP!

Wonderful story. I especially love the ending sentence. It was absolutely perfect!

cool, I really enjoyed reading this thanks for posting it on ff.

This story was so sweet! I especially like the ending, it's really heartwarming.
I think it's a nice touch to present this story through Sanji relating the story to Chopper, very creative.
Nice story!

gosh i really like this story. it went in a full circle i felt. i do wounder what zoro would say in his fever state but then again we didnt learn much with sanji beside the whole leopard theory.

Awwwwww! I love this so much! Well done! For all that Sanji and Zoro don't seem like they get along I can see this happening and I love the way you dug into the relationship between Sanji and Zeff. I always loved their story arc. The fact that Zeff, a fierce pirate, was willing to give up his leg for Sanji and then give him ALL the food when they were marooned on that island, so awesome :)

Oh, wow, you're an absolutely genious with writing! Looks so much forward to read more from you!
*digs in to see if you have more One Piece-goodies*

Have a wonderful Week!

Love & Hugs

Crystal Blue Fox

I don't usually read nakama fics but this was really good.

Yay, update! I already sang my praises over the last chapter, so I can only repeat myself: This is nicely done, very much so, in fact.
Seen as a whole this story has everything I like; structure, pacing, characters that actually deserve the name, enough twists to make me curious and an ending that has me leaning back with a satisfied sigh.
I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much!