Reviews for Always Snow
Guest chapter 3 . 11/4/2019
You know 1987 is a important date for fnaf?
fallondyson chapter 7 . 7/14/2019
PLEASE UPDATE ON THIS STORY SOON PLEASE
Rueneko 11 chapter 7 . 6/13/2019
I'm sad you stopped.
For your information he was sat under the stairs - you
I will try to do all pe peeves I've seen. - Lily
Your going to want to see this - Tom
Guest chapter 7 . 7/2/2018
Yay! A fellow human who cries at the terrible grammar in these stories. I have found so many good plots ruined by terrible spelling and grammar that it's not even funny. These children need either a beta reader or to go back to English class, honestly. Btw ur story is great, thx for continuing it.

-This has been a rant by a lady too lazy to log in again.
AwesomeEevee chapter 7 . 3/23/2018
THANK YOU! I go to Challenger School and they have taught me subject, predicate, and such since first grade or younger. When I see this I am SO frustrated. Finally, SOMEONE who feels my pain!
Guest chapter 7 . 8/24/2017
Ok... I'll honor what you said. This was a great story though, especially chapter 6. Thanks for writing and I hope I will find the continued project on your account.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/24/2017
This has me crying already, but thank you very much for writing! Beautiful and so sad from the first chapter on.
Siera-Knightwalker chapter 6 . 3/10/2017
Are you really going to write more or is this the end? Its...very sad. And I'm sort of surprised no one did anything. Makes me wonder why Sandman couldn't enter through the wards. I really want to know what Jack was feeling when he saw Hermione die and Nix just lose all hope. Did she know Jack was there?
Siera-Knightwalker chapter 7 . 3/10/2017
Trust me, I get how annoying it can be. I had no idea people who love writing and literature, in general, could be this bad in grammar. Quite frankly, I hate it but some people write stuff like that by mistake. You need a bit more apathy. Some assholes just don't want to improve.
MoonPrincess623 chapter 7 . 2/15/2017
Amazing. Sad, but good. I'll wait for big story.
misherukuro chapter 6 . 10/23/2016
This was an amazing read thank you.
HoldTightAndPretendItIsAPlan chapter 7 . 7/15/2016
IT CAN ALSO BE: 'He was seated on a stool.'

And I agree with you, grammar is going down the drain! We need more editors on this site. (Worse than bad grammar is bad spelling. How? HOW?! Autocorrect is a thing people! Just copy-paste into google if you're that desperate!)
Guest chapter 2 . 7/10/2016
i literally cried on this one
Extended Experience chapter 7 . 7/1/2016
But what if you had a sentence like this one: "She looked around at the seating arangement that had been assigned; Julia was placed near the front, and Johnathon was sat in the back."
Rinnala chapter 7 . 6/29/2016
I'm really looking forward to the rewrite of this story if it means you will continue it. I'm not quite sure why you rant about grammar, but I can see what you mean. It is annoying. I do have one tentative question though. You say never and I just thought I knew there was an exception to the rule, but maybe you could tell me with certainty.
Would 'he was sat on a stool by his mother' be correct in the scenario of a mother picking up and placing a child on a stool? I know it's definitely correct to replace 'was' with 'had been', but would it be downright wrong to use 'was'?
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