That was too cute :) I don't have too many couples that I'm wildly devoted to in Rekka no Ken, but Wil/Rebecca is definitely one of the few that I do feel really strongly about...it just feels right you know? Anyways, all of these little snippets from their lives and journey together across the game were really well written, you have a very good grasp on the characters and you can really tug at the emotions.

Awesome. It's a very in-character and entertaining look at Dart, Wil, Rebecca and the relationships they share with one another. Especially the comedy between the two former best friends. Wil is a pretty funny guy and Dart plays off him well, even if it is largely based on the support conversations. Two thumbs up.

Amnesia really does bring couples together, doesn't it?

I JUST read this entire story in one sitting, and I thought it was great! Fluffy, cute, funny; all the perfect things to include in writing!

I really thought you did an amazing job with this story. Very few mistakes, completely believable, written awesomely... it's obvious you put in a lot of effort and MADE SURE that the story fic would be good, and that's extremely admirable. Wonderful!

Wil's gonna be sore for the rest of his life!
10/10 Woo hoo!

Well now, this is quite interesting. Very good portrayal of Wil, Dart, and Rebecca's relationship, and quite well written, too. I look forwards to seeing where you're going with this :D