wow

Please let there be a counter seal for that emo revenge sasuke is so annoying and bothersome. By the way this is a great story.

I do not see how you could not like this chapter, in fact, I think the whole story was amazing. This was exactly the kind of scenario that I've been looking to indulge in, and I'm a bit disappointed that you haven't continued with it.

Can't wait for more!

Oh wow! Your fanfiction is quite thought out! I assume you actually had more wrote somewhere, just kind of dropped it and attended to your life, am I right? There aren't very many details, and it seems rather rushed...but other than that, the plotline seems relatively solid...I'm rather curious, though, as to where the plot was actually going. Was the overall goal to successfully revive Whirlpool, or to just give everyone a happy ending? Hm. Questions after questions...

Anyway, although you have dropped this fanfiction, I hope that you write on it some more at some point. It's really a waste for such a good fanfiction to be let go of!

/Takai-sama\

Ok, I have to admit that the story didn't sound all that fascinating at first glance, but it really has had me captivated. It's intriguing, thought out and goes beyond the surface of the characters. I love all the detail of the background happenings! And normally I don't like getting bogged down in political stuff.

Please Please Please continue this story.

Hyper-Super-Mega-Cataclystically AMAZING!

You need to keep on going. It's a good story.

You three gotten DeNoseoed.

Oh crud!

contuie

I like it.
Can you keep it?

A wonderful wtf moment, but somehow I don't like the Naruto/Yami Naruto in the description.
But just two Narutos... awesome.
Especially when they are so similar.

Great chapter!

Konoha seems so manipulative...to an point. Especially the Daimyo. At first I totally thought the second person who popped out of the UzuMemorial stone was Menma (Naruto's counter part) XD

Update soon