Reviews for A Most Excellent Adventure
anne1585 chapter 1 . 2/17
I loved your story. Danny should have known better than to guilt trip Steve into doing something he didn't want to do by implying that he'll be disappointing Grace, which was a low point and then promising him that he could teach them anything he wanted which sparkled a plan in Steve's eyes on exactly what he was going to do, that will certainty teach Danny a lesson. Well done.
Skimball4 chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
Had to laugh with the reference to "Lost" and Joe. I only wish that the story was longer. You are my favorite writer and I've read all of your stuff.
CelicaChick chapter 1 . 3/13/2015
Loved this story. Very cute!
PlatonicLovers chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
You had me at Lost omg :') This was great!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
LOVE it! This would have been a GREAT beginning to that episode!
WolandR chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
LOL! I loved that you threw a reference to Lost in here. Strange that Steve didn't mention anything about Chin, though :-)

Great prequel!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Loved the set up for the episode. Steve has to get over the "girls" bit and as we know, he really got into teaching those scouts. Just not sure it was exactly what the leader was looking for. Very cute sneaking that Lost reference in there and the connection to Joe. I love inside jokes. Thanks for the little insight into how Steve ended up in the jungle with a bunch of little girls. I guess it was a good thing in the end that the guys were there and not just the girls alone.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Great prequel hon. Now must run off to finish watching this episode!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
wow last episode missing scene thankyou for the laugher it was great.
antivol chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Lol! And so that's how it begun! Very much in the spirit of the episode : )! Loved that, thanks for sharing. antivol
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
I wondered why they'd turned out to be there in the first place. This explains everything, thank you!
And after reading this, how excited Steve was to 'teach' the girls makes it funnier!
4thofFive chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
I can totally see the trip starting this way and really, it's all Danny's fault for telling Steve be could talk about anything.
Libraryelf chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
That it explains why Danno didn't go into a rant when Steve started his talk about hunting bore. LOl
francis2 chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
John Locke looked like Joe? Seriously, I've never seen that. Haha. Love that Steve tells Danny he can't handle girls, and he will prove it. Danny doesn't think Steve is serious, but he is! Love this!
sockie1000 chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
oh my...

"Lost? 'John Locke it'? When did you have time to watch Lost? You weren't even on land when it was on."

"Cath gave me the box set for Christmas. And believe it or not, if you saw John Locke, you would swear he looked just like Joe White."

-lol! perfect! :D
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