Ooo, neat

This is cute and kind of sad. It makes me wish there was more. Poor Pitch, so alone, so confused. And innocent young Jack, pure as the snow he creates. I love this ship, it is very whimsical, dark but innocent. Depending on how it is done. But I love this story gives you insight to the lighter side of Pitch, makes you wonder what exactly he does in the shadows. This is well written and was a pleasant read.

This was painfully sweet.

This ship is just screaming to come out. That scene in the movie where they're fighting and Pitch is trying to convince him to come over to the dark side? What goes better together than cold and dark? Oh come on, there was all sorts of connotations there! Lol.

...I told myself tnhat too. And look where I am. Geez.
Yes. Yes, Jack is far too beautiful to be locked up. Glad you see that Pitch. And glad you think so too. But then why do so many authors do that to himmm-
I'm hopeless.
Anyways, I wonder... You never let us see Jack's side if things (mean but understandable) and now I'm really curious as to what Jack is thinking this whole time and I'm going into a rant now and I am shutting up.
Awww. I feel sad now for no good reason. Going to eat chocolate.
Bye. I'll remember to favorite this when I eventually log back in. Probably.
Scarlet

Hi, could there be a warning on this? An author's note at the beginning, or something in the summary, please? Or the rating upped to M, please? Because it definitely reads like an M. And there are definite child-molestation vibes coming off this. (I read somewhere that the author pinned Jack at around 14, so, yeah.) Anything like that would be greatly appreciated, because I had no idea what I was walking in to on this one. And while I can appreciate that maybe a bit of mystery in the summary is the point, a hint with the chance to back out would also be greatly appreciated. Thank you.

Oh Pitch, you creepy, creepy bugger. You just can't help being terrible, can you? Stalking the poor boy is seriously not okay, dude.

...Why do I adore you so?

I love seeing one-sided blackice, it's great. Very well done.

WHY MUST YOU HURT ME SO

O.o, but why wouldn't you ship them, it just must be done.

This was great! Absolutely brilliant! I still think that Pitch should have taken Jack anyways. It's what i would have done it the same position ;)! Sequel please! Maybe one where he actually does follow through with his urges and abducts sweet little Jack!

I don't like the ship but its so dang intriguing. Almost like forbidden fruit.

YAY. Welcome to the ship, let's make an armada together, what do you say? ;P
Anyway, yes this ship has sailed to sea, and it's unstoppable now! Let's sail off into the sunset and talk about the cute couple these two would potentially be. You share my taste in pairings, which I find good in one of my most favorite authors of all time!

This was sooooo good! This is pretty much exactly how I imagined their relationship would be like. Wonderful!

you write them so beautifully :D i love pitch's complications and i WAS hoping for a happy ever after but i think your ending was damn fine as it is

write more of them please and thank you

hugs,
pretense

Nonononooo what do you mean 'complete'?! Sequel! I'm begging you! This piece of art is too wonderful to just let it stop here! They have to meet again, they need to have some kind of future together.. Don't you feel my fangirl heart shattering? D: