Ohh hope their plan works. I hope Sarah is true with child. I enjoyed . it's great to see we're moving towards the reunion of Sarah's wee family.

My heart melted into a puddle of goo when Corbin said that Brendon was his gift!

An update Love it and the "Tralk " I kept thinking I have heard that before loved watching Farscape

Poor Joey. And yay for Jareth's memory! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow... just wow. I never expected Phaedra's fiancee to show up im a drunken rage. How dare he accuse her of being unfaithful when he is the one who gave up on her and married someone else?!

Other note, having just reread the whole thing so it was fresh in my mind, I noticed a minor inconsistency. Cestral told the Empress that she had never taken the drug to induce her vision before (a few chapters back, not sure which one though... it's the one where she is with the Empress and her father, and the Empress insists that she takes the drug); but in this chapter it says that she's used it twice before with negative reactions (which I totally like better than her never taking it before). Anyways, it's a minor thing, but I thought you'd want it brought to your attention.

Oh, Jareth's grief when he thought he'd lost Sarah :'( waaah.

And jareth has all his memories back! I'm glad he is feeling sufficiently guilty.

And I knew there was something up with that cat. Can't wait to find out what.

Great update! Can't wait to read more!

Yay we got an update. :) Thank you.

I can't wait until the little family unit is reunited.

Loved this bit:

"He took her hand and pulled her to sit upon his lap, then placed her hand over his heart. "No, love. I hope it never comes, but should there be a day that you do not want to remain at my side, I will let you go.""

I love a Jareth that is possessive but can learn to let her go. :)

Woo! Great update! Happy you are continuing :-)

So I've come to the end. What a journey. What twists and turns. I only hope that it will continue in the future.

I so need to know all these secrets jareth is keeping. I think that's why he is bugging me haha.
I really like Corbin though. Not that he appeared in this chapter.

I really like how intricate and detailed your plot is. So many elements woven together.

I love cats but I don't trust that cat. Seems to convenient a travel partner LOL. I am still loving this story so much. I'm less irritated by jareth this morning than I was in the last few chapters. I am still waiting for Sarah to explode with all her feelings though haha.

I don't know why but Jareth is annoying me a little bit. Maybe it's his hypocrisy because he treats Sarah like a "child" When it comes to sadah not knowig his world but doesn't liked being when it comes to her world. I guess that's the king in him but he is really bugging me. Like I feel Sarah should chew him up haha.

I should have reviewed this more but I love this story too much and have to keep pressing next before I get a chance to review.

I'm really enjoying this. I'm a bit confused but hopefully that confusion gets clarified soon. I see its been nearly a year since the last update and the reviews say it's not finished. I will continue to rear it and live in hope as this seems like a story I will really enjoy :)