lol this was awesome! I am SO glad you got into the Merlin fandom, you wrote this all so well! There was one thing I couldn't figure out though when Merlin realized he couldn't use his magic on the wolves and he thought he and Gwaine might actually die, why didn't he call the dragon?

I absolutely loved this story! Thank you so much for writing it!

It's such an original way to reveal Merlin's magic and the plot is extremely captivating. I think you've captured every single character's personality perfectly. None of them were OOC to me and your antagonist was very intriguing and believable.

This story is very well written, good grammar and spelling too. It's all so professional with the plot and everything.

I REALLY loved the cursed ice wolf idea! I loved it. Gwaine being cursed was pretty cool, I like how he talked telepathically to Merlin and all, that scene really captured his personality.
I also loved the whole Merlin showing his magic in the cage too.

I'm very glad I found this story and I'm very grateful that you published it. Thank you so much! :)

You write very well. Everybody is in character. The imagery and descriptions of the shivering citizens were making me feel cold.

Ahhhhh this was just... perfect. You wrote Arthur and Merlin and everyone so well. This is the only fic I've read where I believe they're truly in character, and overall it is definitely one of the best fics I've read! Thanks for writing it.

Can you pleaaase put this fic up on ao3? :D

And now, Merlin turns into a badass werewolf !

I loved it! Thanks for writing!

NO! IT ENDED?! what is this madness...? omg. that was truly a REALLY good story though. i'm so happy i found this after its been a 2 years since you wrote this story. but god... that was PERFECTION XD i really loved it.
i dont know if you will get this... i see that you stopped writing years ago :( but i wish for you to continue writing some really good stories in the future and you have another follower in me :P xxx

Great story. I've read quite a few reveal fics but I felt that you made this your own with the winter and the goddess problem. I felt like Arthur was very in character as he struggled to accept Merlin and as he then struggled with the guilt of his actions. Merlin's fear was also nicely balanced with his cocky attitude and the whump factor was an excellent bonus. And I loved Gwaine. I always love Gwaine and his loyalty. And I laughed out loud at Percival and his handkerchief. Lovely story, thanks for writing it.

Oh, I really enjoyed your story! I liked the drama and the humor and the unusual situation. Nicely done! :-)

Very interesting. As mad as I was at Arthur, I feel like this was a accurate representation of him and his feelings. And I liked the whole crystal thing. It reminded me of the White Witch in Narnia but there was also enough of your own imagination for her to be her own original character. Well done.

Awesome! :)

Wonderful, thanks! I love Merlin defeating a goddess! And Arthur not happy but realizing he has no choice.

That was awesome

I think Merlin is too understanding and forgiving of Arthur.