Jealousy is not love... It is just a form of selfishness. It is a way to protect your self-esteem.

I adore overreactive!England! Your entire characterisation of everyone is brilliant.

Yes, America was so suspicious!

And if America would cheat, which he WOULD NEVER DO THAT WHEN HE FINALLY WITH ENGLAND, definitely not with Japan.

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But fic with misunderstanding with Cheating as topic definitely what this OTP needed with Happy Ending in the end! xD
(Gosh, I kind of sound like Masochist, wanting my OTP to have emotional conflict that would hurt even me)

I like this a lot, I'm sorry to hear that you think you didn't do very well. Maybe it helps a little if I say that I thought this was really cute and although I could have never imagined America to cheat on England with Japan, I was quite lost on just what was going on. The ending was really cute, especially the movie-line part, it made me smile.
Sooo, thanks for writing this, I truly enjoyed it:)

For a minute there, I thought it was gonna be all angst. THANK GOD laf;kdflksdflsf This is so cute! :D

Duuuuuuuuuude...why wouldn't Kiku want to hear any noise?
He's a hard-core yaoi fangir- I mean boy. HE'D WANT ALL THE NOISE AND HE'D TAKE NOTES
:O
But seriously, nice fic bro. I like it. Especially the subtle and very not-true JapAme hints at the beginning XD
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Very sweet! And cute! Love it when you write stories like these. :):):):)

Psh like Japan hadn't already planted cameras in the guest room. I could practically hear him chanting, "yaoi, yaoi, yaoi!" As America and England were having their heart to heart. That was quite cute and America you would role play with Japan. Stay awesome!

This story! Love it! So much tension! And i am shame to admit that i fall to the same conclusion as one Arthur Kirkland. Forgive me Alfred! *bow*
i assure you, you are very much a good writer and you definitely can write! Though, there is one sentence where you say that England think rationally when he felt threatened, is that wahat you mean or is it supposed to be irratonally? Just asking! Lovely story! So cute!

THIS IS ADORABLE!
It's so Arthur-like to react that way XD

This was very sweet. It felt like a slice of life and considering it's Hetalia, that's quite a feat. You portrayed England's trust issues quite well. Kudos for Portugal's mention, since their alliance has been one of (if not the) longest in history. Very well done, dear.

This is really well written :) really felt the tensity and the drama...I can imagine what 'noise' they'll be making at 1 in the morning. Do keep up the great work :)